I like it a lot!

Hey I love this story so much! I really hope you will come back to it someday! It was a joy to read all the chapters you've written so far! Thank you for writing!

Some criticism here. I LOVE a lot of your stories they're the kind of fanfiction i actively seek out and ignoring some ticks your writing style has and your insistance on mostly making hermione seem like some kind of godess in most of them they're still amazingly written which is kinda rare espacially when combined with a very good plot. but WHY OH FREAKING WHY TO YOU ABANDON YOUR STORIES JUST AS THEY GET INTERESTING like polymagus or something like that i forgot had such a brutal cliffhanger it made me mad af. Anw i still follow them just in case you get an epiphany and decide to complete some of your stories because they are that good. I really hope you do.

Some of the best writing I've seen on this site. You have a talent for it.

If you need more motivation to get back to your unfinished stories, perhaps you should set up a Patreon account?

Seems very interesting so far

I loved this. An intelligent but not cocky Harry and the way you portrayed Dumbledore was amazing. I don’t like him but your version I’ve never seen before in any other story and it will stick with me. Thanks

it's great and so sad at the same time to see what Cedric could have been like. his life was cut short so earlyi hope to see more of this story in the future, but if you don't continue it, well done and thank you!

love the chapter. and I'm totally okay with the romance fizzling out. it feels natural like this. of course if you get them there somehow that might be neat too.

lovely chapter!

okay, I need that egyptian necklace. and I really like the flundering sraco malfoy here!

was that the same review twice? still love your writing!

i love love love this. Excellent worldbuilding! I love your portrayal of Dumbledore, the growth Harry goes through, the conversations between Dumbledore and Harry, everything! you write fantastically!

love this!

This is an excellent story.

For me, the term “Holy Magic” describes a specific branch of Light Magic that was created by the Church and was specifically created to fight against DEMONS. Think the Paladin Class in roleplaying games like Dungeons And Dragons or World Of Warcraft to know what I’m talking about.