God damn how does someone make a story so fucking complicated in like two chapters. The better Fan fiction on this site tends to go two ways in my opinion. A fanfiction writer will make a single change to the story and the resulting story is basically the butterfly effect that. A sort of cause and effect story if you will. A good example of this would be Shirou and Miya are transported to the fate/zero time, and are somehow dragged into it. Then there’s the stories like this one where the author just throws shit in that can absolutely not be mistaken for the effect of a cause and is instead just some thing the author wants to happen so he finds some bullshit way to make it happen. for example, shirou not just summoning but summoning EMIYA as a ruler class. And then quickly summoning caster immediately afterwards. That’s like three huge changes to the story that made absolutely no fucking sense.

Hey, hey, Manaka! Hey, a hey, Manaka!

a shame that you aren't continuing this
I really wanted to see the reactions of his mother and father once they found out who he actually was

This was great, I'd love to see more. And I'm kinda curious who the other Servants are. Also, since we have both Medea and Gilles as Casters and that technically 2 HGWs are happening at the same time wouldn't that mean there's 2 Servants of each Class?

I know it’s been awhile since you’ve worked on this story, and I don’t know the chances of you returning to it, but I really enjoyed it. Having Miyu and this Shirou go to Fate/Zero is a fascinating idea, and including the Fate Prototype characters as well makes it even more interesting. The writing is top notch too, and I enjoy the mini chapters at the end that gives us the chance to see a more in depth point of view of other characters.

I kinda wish that Ayaka and Manaka along with all them others were not in the fic.

Elsa and her son Luca excluded, I think it's both nice and sad to introduce them: Nice; because you get to see lil Shirou before the fire and meet his mom. Sad; because if things to as canon - even slightly - it means she's likely gonna die in that fire.

I had honestly thought it was better with only the Fate/Zero cast plus Shirou, Miyu, Ruler Emiya and Caster Medea.

This is great.

a) I still yhink a grand servant is OP, even if installed,
b) I forgot to mention this, but I was screaming that Shirou fought a caster with an assasin. Any FGO player would tell you that's plain stupid. 1/2 attack and x2 damage is a terrible handicap.
c) I'm a hardcore shirou x arotira fan as despite liking the other girls artoria is most similar to shirou and in my opinion the most likely one to save him from himself (HF doesn't count as shirou had forsaken his ideals, but rather I mean artoria wouldn't let him be consumed by his ideals). But having ruler EMIYA and all your reasons for it makes me wish Hakuno was their with Shirou. Honestly hakuno x archer may be even better than shirou x saber, so what about kaleid shirou as he's close to archer. Kufufufufu...

...ugh...
The first hassan is a grand servant, above even Gilgamesh. The only reason solomon was summoned was due to events being manipulated for him to be part of chadlea. Kinda weird shirou got a card for him. I mean I love him as he's the 3rd best assasin (shiki and heroine X!) But it's still a rather OP card.

Go fucking kill your self you retarded ass cunt and take this absolute steaming pile of fucking bull shit with you

;-; Ayaka

EMIYA Is Not Weak His A Skilled Warrior The Only Problem From Him Is He Lacks Firepower Like Real Noble Phantasm The Only Thing He Have Is Broken Phantasm

wow, kudos for you for actualy making a cute, lovable and redeemable Manaka. It's pretty rare considering the fact that almost every fanfic that had her in it (which is already rare to begin with) turns her into an antagonistic "Evil of humanity".

Poor Elsa. She literally had no idea her son gonna took his path.
Yes, blamed it all to that godforsaken poor excuse of a Magus Killer.
He's the one that lead your boy to hell itself.
And surely the mother has no idea how EX-rank powerful her son of his Harem Protagonist skill once he grown to a fine man xD

Wow. I'm liking Manaka even more!
Touching the Root has lost all his humanity when knowing something already in the planes of existence but if something outside the plane like Shirou from the Miyuverse being thrust to that world.
Her new world is soon filled and to think falls in love quickly xD