| Reviews for Sleepover At The Pickles |
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Ribeiro1986 chapter 1 . 8/14/2019 Cute |
GrimliFiendish chapter 1 . 10/1/2017 Very cute story |
Lost42 chapter 1 . 8/22/2017 Good story |
celrock chapter 1 . 8/21/2017 Great story, though you got one thing wrong. If Tommy is 2 and Dil is 1, that would make Chuckie age 3, not 4. You put he was age 4. Not sure if that was a typo, or if you miscalculated math wise with their ages, but thought I'd point out the error to you so you'd know for future stories. Other than that, great job here, and keep up the great writing! |