Really, really nice story. I hope it isn't discontinued? I'd love to read about what's going to happen next ... The plot seems really interesting and your writing's pretty good too ... So ... I hope you'll continue?
Greetings

Oh god please tell me this fic hasn't been abandoned its so damn good!
It would be cool to see Luffy kinda take the lead when they finally meet up with Shanks introducing his brothers to his friends!

I know you have your own pace and that's great, but this story is AMAZING and I really want to see more and I'm kind of scared that this has been abandoned. This story is so good I can't bear it! So please update soon, I really, really want to see what happens next. :D

Please make more! I want to know what happened please! :,(

I hope that ace and Sabo and Luffy meets Nami and Zoro and Ussop and Sanji and chopper and Robin and Brook and Franky and Jinbei and Rayleigh and Shakki and Whitebeard crew and please update soon.:)

Yep this story is getting interesting .:)

Thank you for making this amazing story and please update soon :)

Am glad that ace and Sabo and Luffy are alright and safe and please update soon :)

Please Update when you can!

Oh! kuina! nice

How amazing it is to find a young brothers fic that isn't full of homo erotic tendencies, Luffy is a weak wuss and/or Ace and Sabo act as dotting mothers with their sickly firstborn, all soft and worried and shit.

You captured their wildness and violence perfectly, so thank you! I like 'em much better this way.
A few mistakes I fell I should point out tho, I think you are underestimating their strenght right now. Like hunting rabbits to eat, and having a wolf steal one, when in canon they've never been seen eating anything smaller than boars, and their regular diet consist mostly of bear, crocodiles, tiger and yes wolves. Also, they should not be so much weaker than Kuina. Maybe she could be stronger than Sabo and Ace, but never by so much that her speed seems unbeliavable and her strenght is enough that one blow can almost knock Ace out... They are monsters in their own right, and have faced worse and barely flinched, but the most problematic part of your story is that it breaks the flow, because it seems like Ace and Sabo are more or less on the same lvl as Zoro, which makes Luffy a lot weaker and that is a big no-no.

Ooh save Kuina. Though Zoro must still get his sword. I understand why Dragon abandon his son but it desn't change my mind he's a shitty parent in this fic. Thank you for the update, I can't wait fr when they join up with Shanks. I still want Ace to have his Whitebeard family though.

Oh! This is so good!
Thank you for writing this story:)

Thank you very much for this amazing chapter. I love when you describe Dragon's feelings.

are they going to encounter/recruit other members of Luffys crew? one of the things that always bothers me about these AU is that I know what kind of hell a number of them will suffer through without his intervention. also maybe Kuina will join them (she's definitely strong enough).