Poor Lori

Wow, this was emotional! I must admit, I was stunned that you went as far as to have Lori asks Rita if she was happy for the miscarriage. And I think Rita's reply was d**n near perfect, there really is no way to explain how it feels to know your young child miscarried.

Huge props to you for tackling this issue with an extreme sense of maturity and realism.

A general assumption when looking at the title (presumably)
Pre-reading: oh sweet, a Non-Lincoln lemon fanfic!
Post reading: oh, that sucks Lori, sorry.

Wow. Loved it. Poor Lori.

Wow! Very emotional and sad, but touching story too. Goes to show you that no matter what mistakes we make in life, our immediate family, like our parents, will always love us, even if the walls of trust have to be rebuilt from the ground up over time.

As always, keep up the great writing!