| Reviews for Fifth Emperor |
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CrowKrowQrow chapter 6 . 2h Yo, kind of late, and don't know if you're even debating this yet. But I think the story is great. And about the time-skip, it would be nice, but perhaps after this Luffy gets at least some infamy. He hasn't got one bounty yet. The events that would be happening about now that I can think of that would be nice to see him intervening would be: Big Mom forming the Totto Land, Kaido should be fighting Oden soon, Moria's crew being killed by Kaido, Sanji's born and his mom dies (the whole Germa thing) and Fishman's Island is still being attacked by all types as Whitebeard hasn't took as a territory. Boa becomes a slave around then too. Then some five(ish) years later you have Fisher Tiger. Who is currently a slave if Luffy wants to play Fisher Tiger he can actually release Fisher Tiger. Crocodile becomes a Shichibukai around then too. |
hitadaayumi chapter 1 . 6/27 please update |
StoneTheLoner chapter 5 . 5/18 Ease up a little dude. It's way too early to be starting a kid on Haki training. It instantly felt wrong, like there'd been some kind of mistake. The kids training should've been regular training, not some mystical power almost exclusively used by powerful pirates and marines. It'd be like if Garp started teaching Toby Haki first thing... They would be getting ahead of themselves. Start with the basic things first, get some experience and THEN you can learn haki. |
Lucky Lucy Heart chapter 6 . 4/21 PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON! |
BlackGryphon101 chapter 1 . 4/12 Reading this story again because I needed pick me up. Remembered just how much I enjoyed reading this fic the first time. Shame it hasn’t been updated in a year or so, but I live in hope that one you might go an finish this amazing story. I can’t wait to see who Luffy ends up recruiting next. I hope Luffy recruits Brook soon because I can’t see Luffy just leaving him alone in the Florian Triangle for 20 years it would take until young Luffy would start his pirate journey. The are so many potential crewmember’s for Luffy to recruit like Pedo, Douglass Bullet, members of the Eleven Supernova’s,or Oden and some of his samurai. I’m really hoping the latter scenario if you to continue on with this that Luffy will intervene in the events leading to Kozuki’s Oden’s disgrace and execution. Especially, since the reason why he ended up picking a fight with Big Mom in the first place (during the Fishman Island was because he said he couldn’t trust someone like her to look after his friends home. Regarding your poll on the most recent chapter I hope you end writing about both Emperor Luffy! and mini Luffy. Although, according to the more recent chapters once Luffy becomes Emperor it’s going to stay that way ( him, Whitebeard, Kaido and Big Mom) for awhile because apparently according to Sengoku Shanks was only a Yonko for four years before Luffy began his journey. Keep up the good work I really enjoyed reading this fic and I eagerly await further updates, if you plan on continuing this. |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/5 Hello ! I really love this concept ! I would like you to continue this story to see how Luffy becomes a Youko and all who he will meet during his new voyage. However I also would like to know how Luffy will meet him young self. Moreover, I want to have a chapter when Luffy meets Ace and also Garp because his family name is now Portgas D. So Ace and Garp will think that they are related. So yeah, I really hope you continue this story ! |
YellowFuckthe name is taken chapter 6 . 4/6 Continue this |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/1 When comes the next chapther |
arinst2305 chapter 6 . 2/27 write this story and spend a lot of time |
waiz chapter 6 . 2/18 I think you should resume this time line a little bit building his crew a little and start little time skip and then big one If you'r continuing the story that is? |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/10 Just do furture luffy then when he meet younger luffy as a kids just forces on FL |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25 Time travel fanfic at 11k words , pointless |
Guest chapter 6 . 1/21 Men this is such an interesting topic amazing keep it going also. |
Guest chapter 6 . 1/13 Please update! |
Tiribiri chapter 6 . 1/9 I agree with angeldunn1993 Tho I think you might be slightly inactive right now |