CHAN CHAN BARA!

So this train wreck of a story is finished?

Good.

Well, I did expect Alex to win [My OC just lost 10,000 yen ;( ]. You did a very nice job with this Fanfiction. I enjoyed it. The ending of the story with the spirits added a very nice touch to wrap up the story. I felt as though it truly gave the reader a great sense of closure for the story. I'm looking forward to the Zyurangers in Kalos 'movie'. :)

For Star Wars, I would really like to see a fanfiction on Kylo Ren and the First Order. I've fould Kylo(*cough cough* Ben Solo) to be an intriguing character.

Happy Holidays! :)

That was pretty cool! I did like the way you ended that. Zahab and Battobass were super cool characters and I was satisfied with the ways that they went out. I do wish they could have somehow survived, but I understand why they couldn't...

Btw, I haven't had the chance to read your Force Awakens yet. I did however see The Last Jedi and I would 100% recommend it. :)

Wow. A lot happened! I am actually at a loss of words...that was incredibly well written. :) I feel really bad for the old generals...I really hope they are spared. Lord Drakkon was, of course, expected to die, but I didn't think his death was going to trigger Daitanix to rise. Well done. :)

Well, wasn't looking forward to it, but Shinkenger's over.
The battle was OK. Personally, I think it felt a little rushed. In your previous stories with Pokemon Leagues, tension builds up abound the final, as two characters keep winning, and they eventually have to face each other. Add that to the fact that they started a bet DURING the battle, and this did seem like a blander league final than previously.

And now that the story's finished, here's a review on it as a whole:
The story was very entertaining, and full of interesting lore, as well as a genuinely mysterious character in Shinken White, and the 7 OCs who made up the main cast were all well written characters with clear traits and growth. The story had a good build up, and two great twists near the end, and remained pretty well-paced, until the end. Near the end, it became just a little rushed, with some events happening off-page. As well as that, a lot of the side or supporting characters weren't memorable, and the Pokemon weren't really that memorable either.
However, as said above, the story is still very entertaining. There's a lot of good action, and there have been some very emotional parts.
All in all, the story is engaging, thrilling and intriguing, but it's not quite as good as its predecessor.

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Eh, the most underwhelming League final you've done imo. It used to be Luke's, but at least Luke and Jason were shown to have a rivalry with each other. Jack and Alex appeared to have one at the start, but it sorta just went away.

And it doesn't help apart from the dragons, Trunks, and Feraligatr it was hard to actually care about the other Pokemon. They barely appeared, and we never saw how Jack got Lanturn and Rhydon, or Alex's Magmar(How it'd even evolve anyways?)
And Jack's loss was pretty predictable; Red at least was pretty much Ash's equal in Kalos, Gary was handled well both times, and Luke beat Jason every time until the finals. Jack meanwhile was shown as a weaker trainer, and actually lost to gym leaders without a hang over being the cause. If it was the other way around, the battle might have been better off.

The story's not bad, just the League finals. I do think the teams were handled better for the main characters when it was just Ash and Jason doing the journey quest. We got to see all their Pokemon get to shine and develop since they didn't need to share time with another trainer's Pokemon doing the same quest as them.

I look forward to the Zyuranger story, I honestly don't care about the post-ROTJ era of Star Wars at all. Though that could change with Last Jedi, we'll see...

Battle of titans. I for real though Jack was gonna win. Oh well. Alex is still. Good. And Hikoma claimed he was not a mercenary. Alex is ok.
Star wars story? Hmm. The correct answer is C. But if I had to choose between the two? A.

R.I.P John Prion
Chapter 1 - Chapter 56
A man who, to his last breath, fought to defend Johto.

Well, not much to say, is there? Bloody great chapter. Honestly, not looking forward to the next

Yeah! Zahab! Fight for good!
Well, rape and torture, didn't think you'd go there. This story actually seems more extreme than the previous one, and that one had SATAN in it.
Well, good job uploading twice in one day, that's definitely a record.
And at what point did Hikoma say ANYTHING about the Daitanix becoming unbound?

Anyway, good chapter

This is the first time I actually cared about Battobass, I never did find him as interesting as Zahab and Hisan.
So the Gedoshu are finished, and Zahab didn't survive... I kinda expected him to live while Hikoma died, but the reverse happened.
So the League finals would be next, not sure if you'll do that time skip again like in your other stories. I am curious what Takeru will do now that his job is finished though.
Honestly not as excited for the final battle as I usually am, Jack's been played as the underdog the entire time when it came to battling and if it's gonna go the way we all suspect... yeah. Still wondering what his sixth Pokemon will turn out to be.

Last chapter. The end of the tale of Takeru. Woah. No matter how many times you end a story I can't brace myself for it. Every ending of any story is just like Altaïr said "The end of an era."

"No more hope" Oh boy. I don't like this.
Well technically Rey was using the force to give her a edge in the fight. Also Kylo Took a shot from Chewbaccas bowcaster which sends troopers flying and just took 2 steps back. So the Knight of ren was definitely distracted and limited by using most of the force do dull the pain and not enhance his strength (as sith tend to do.) And if that ain't it...GODDAMMIT THIS IS A GALAXY WHERE YOU CAN TRAVEL AT THE SPEED OF LIGHT AND MOVE THINGS WITH YOUR MIND. F*CK LOGIC!
Also Zahab is a definite warrior. Fight for your cause but may that cause not be of death.

HA, I can tell that is a Rey jab. I never did like that, Kylo should have kicked her ass like he did to Finn.
Wow, the legendary Pokemon got killed. I was not expecting that to happen at all

Also, fuck you Hikoma. He tells them to seal Drakkon, but won't give them any warning about "What might happen"? That is grade-a bullshit. Seriously, if Hikoma dies, I will not be sad.