"I am Raglor, the twin brother of –"

Ah. Magolor right?

Sorry it's
www . youtube watch ? v DFosm4jvkDY
Just remove the spaces (blame FFn)

Wheel mode Robobot-theme: (Ragnor is screwed) - watch?vDFosm4jvkDY

I really like this fanfiv. This is very good! This is how they should have ended and I really liked the idea of naming the Robobot Armor Ragolor. Yes, I agree with the idea that Metal Knight and Susie talked with each other about the Armor.

Holy. Nova.
I always headcanoned that Kirby or Meta Knight would return for the armor after all it had done, and it's so cool to actually so a story about that! (I cried at the ending too...) The character's personalities were well-done too; quiet Meta talking with Susie comes to mind, and Kirby and Dedede as well. And Meta's talk at the beginning, and his thoughts on the situation (nice callback to the description; I'm on to you!) I smiled through the whole thing.

I like how you alternated character views throughout the story. It was a nice little touch. :) I really enjoyed this work; great job!