i think i'm gonna stop reading here; not gonna lie, but Garon is a bad person who does bad things for bad reasons, and Lora is a knight that has - beyond him making her a a Master-at-Arms - quite literally no reason to love the king beyond maybe friendship. she's even said it multiple times to multiple people, that her past has made it so that her relationship with the king will never evolve past maybe-friendship. but of course you have all of these people saying 'embrace the love in your heart!' and 'honestly no one would care if you loved Garon', which is dumb by the way, and shoddy writing.

i figured from the title she would eventually become a queen - or it could have been figurative, who knows? - but i was thinking maybe she was romancing one of the princes, or even one of the princesses - xander, in a romance that has her struggling with fighting her loyalty for her king with the growing appreciation for the prince. or camilla, whom of which would act as a counterpart for lora's fighting ability and tactical mind with guile and sensually sharp wit. not the king, literally seemingly overnight and five days after his wife died and he executed one of his concubines.

from chapter two this story was flawed in some ways that could be ignored, but i personally can't ignore this one.

hope the rest of the story goes well, but i'm getting off here.

I haven't actually read this beyond its synopsis, I'm just hoping to release some of the stress of playing the actual dark souls 3 game, which I suck at. and thus is rage-inducing and I can play in no more than 20 min increments before I the desire to break things becomes too much. (just felt like ranting a bit don't mind me)

Awesome chapter.

It's wonderful to see them having fun. They're undoubtedly cute!

The scenes relating to plants are excellent. They show the other side of your characters.

That trial sounds like being long rang attacked by a sniper, so amazing! Lora seems to improve that aspect. Does Elise have Dark Souls attack moves?

Lora and Garon seem to be very busy behind the scene. I like how Selena acts.

It's good to know how Corrin thinks and how others view Lora. The scene of Corrin studying weapons is marvelous.

I guess Lora sending the best of the best to her mission. What happened between her and the boon?

Aren't they in Smash?

Good chapter my Friend. Not much to comment on for this chapter, you’ve come a long way since the first couple of chapters. And I shall await to see what you do with not only the route but with that interaction as well.

But I couldn’t help but wonder this chapter, since it was mentioned, what does everyone think of Lora since she doesn’t age?

Hmmm. No interactions between Selena and Lora foror,now huh? Well this is the beginning of the fire emblem fates story afterall.

And well reading reading this chapter's author's notes and to be fair Lora had the unfortunate curse of being semi-immortal no doubt she has been slayed instantly on more the one occasion most likely seeing abit of herself in Selena I mean why else would she even show interest in the red head and apparently Beruka. Lora dose seem keen on cold like Camilla's retainers.

I'll assume that this mission still ends with Corrin going to Hoshido, so I'm going to guess that Ryoma is going to spot his sister and go HAM, despite the fact that Nohr is flying a truce flag, giving Garon a convenient casus-belli, and since Corrin is in Hoshido, [BLANK] and the barrier will fall. How that happens, I haven't got a clue, but I'm eagerly looking forward to it.

She-Walhart

This legitimately made me chuckle.

hey idea crossover for you.
Rising of the Shield Hero and Fire Emblem Fates.
Naofumi x Female Corrin

I'm sure Severa coul take on at least a late mid-game to early late game blood borne boss. She did harm and survive a dragon God after all

Hm hm hm... still the same old problems but nothing too horrid or confusing. Quite damn good English. And honestly it would he a funny interaction to have, either by themselves or with Corrin around.

Now the question is which path Corrin shall take? Regardless, I believe that it will be an interesting one.

Awesome chapter.

Uuuuugh this story is soooo goooooood.

What if you add a Bloodborne hunter into the mix? Maybe on the hoshido side? Maybe has Chikage as their weapon. Some sort of equivalent to the ashen one?

It is wonderful for me to see this story moving forward. Does Lora's training make Corrin becoming far stronger than she originally is? Corrin seems to face bigger challenges than she originally should be. I love to see more about her family time. How did Corrin make her own choice among different weapons? I'm interested in that process.

What exactly is Flora thinking at that moment? I'm curious.

Can Lora emulate ninja's fighting style? Is this the reason why Corrin doesn't know about fighting ninja? Forgot to ask whether Garon learned Dark Souls magic.

Did Lora almost interrupt the fight? Love to see her interaction with Rinkah.

Garon being a good and reasonable Papa, I really love this. Can't say this enough !

Well after reading this chapter a responses it is definitely safe to say Selena's getting those two weeks off! I mean Camilla would love to jest around with Lora (in which Lora might actually approve of seeing her step daughter grow a spine and taking a liking to Selena). Even though Selena can't beat Lora when it comes to a duel Lora could still teach her some dark soul sword technique may that would help the trio be more prominent. Well that's what I hope.