that jaune has 16(40cm) inches of pleasure

Here an idea if you want to add to your story if you want.

Make a surprise when Jaune's parents and seven sisters are found out to be faunus and the Arc family has always been made up faunus and he is the only human born of his entire family history. That would make every female faunus like Blake want him even more since he come from a family of faunus.

jaune i seen this before JUST JUMP OUT THE WINDOW MONTHRFUCKER

Poor Jaune has no idea just how badly the ladies at Beacon want him, but oddly I see a strange idea of Raven being interested in him.

I mean wouldn't she make both a beautiful ,but scary yandere for Jaune or maybe a really persistent woman wanting him in her tribe? Even if it means tricking him into marriage "for her tribe" as an excuse to get him with her? Due to say the love potion or maybe some other reason she finds alluring?

Don't ask where it comes from, but I had these thoughts at times.

The Siren Grimm, I foresee paying Jaune a visit in his future, but for now he has to deal with the fact his dream might not be so much a dream. But more of a warning he just completely ignored.

:D

As a great bird once said 'LEMME SMASH'

I Think it's time you wrote agian.

Jaune, I've seen these situations before, JUMP OUT THE WINDOW TO LIVE ANOTHER DAY

...well shit...whens the siren gonna appear?

hey you should really work on your Ruby and friends story it's really good

Seeing how that chapter ended, should I get the lotion and tissue paper ready?

I would like to quote Tucker. bow chicka bow wow!

Ah, I remember this one, so you are now doing a revamped version. This is going to be (deadly) entertaining. That said, maybe you want to ease into the different girls' paths, and try to avoid going over the top by having every girl after him, I mean not all of them knows Jaune unless this is taking place during the festival with no invasion going on and they have the foreign students around for some time. Especially because it is not like that story called 'Hearts of Yandere' where Jaune got some semblance that got changed forcefully to attract every damn girl in the area. Since you are probably going with the "Jaune is a nice guy" route, just show the few who know him best.

I will follow this for now.

You might want to fix your grammar at times it feels like you are speaking the story not writing it take this sentence for example: "Jaune finds himself tied to a tree so he freaks out and shouts to call for help." reading that out loud sounds like you are telling the story to your friends not reading it to the audience

. _ . wait.. were am I?... is this... beacon?.. wait a minute, A SUNOFB***