Oh my goodness. First, may I just say that the 'Takes one to know one' . . . I know now where you got it. From your own characterization of the Evil Twins. Poor dweebs.

And secondly - I absolutely LOVE the part where they go through the roof. "With a magnificent splintering sound, they continued their journey, down through the roof and to the stable-floor below."

Good thing they didn't land on a horse.

And the ending! :) Good grief. . . :D

LOL, brilliant story! Boy, were the twins lucky they landed on straw, not wood or stone... or a horse. ;) Speaking of horses, shouldn't they be scared at the sudden noise and making a racket?

aw love ;)

"The stables were in pandemonium." Yes, I would imagine so! LOL! Well done!

Great job! XD

This is absolutely hilarious! I love it!

Oh my word! This was just too good! You see, THIS is the type of stuff I want to write!

This was awesome!

This was awesome! I loved it! So funny, I nearly died! Agh, poor Elladan, being woken up by his twin, haha! XD Great job, and thank you so much and I did enjoy it!

- Erelil Morningstar