noooo you can't leave it thereee noooooo

Last updated on 27th Sep 2017, that is far to long to wait for a new chapter on a story this good. I hope an update will be coming very soon...It can not be left unfinished.

Come back!
Please come back and finish this story!

I honestly love your stories, can't stop reading.

Very interesting so far, I'm curious where this will go.
A few questions/suggestions:

T ((W*C)/(S*A))*R
Unluss R is supposed to be smaller the more resistance there is I think you meant: T ((W*C)/(S*A))/R
While you do mention the factor of time in the formula itself there is no mention of it.

Several times you us the wrong prepositions.
A few examples: '... said ghostly teacher is fixated in one aspect...' in should be on.
'...when Hermione po(c)ked him sharply on the ribs...' on should be in, also should be poked instead of pocked.
'...house are supposed to on their respective tables...' on should be at.
There's a few more typo's also. Perhaps you could find a beta?
Since English is not my first language I've been told I sometimes come across as harsh or condescending when I meant it as construcitve criticism.
I'm going to read the next chapter now.
Toodles

Please continue Potter. I have just finnished this to chapter 7 and thank much.

Nice read... I hope it continues at some point, but:

Lumos, in book canon, projects a thin beam of light quite unlike the bright orb used in the movies - much more useful for dazzling an unsuspecting adversary than judging strength. Though apparantly the first DADA spell was colourful sparks so, go figure.

For Astronomy, though... I think it works better if the influence of the celestial spheres is pervasive and omni-present, yet subtle. So the Average Wizard could just power through by brute-forcing most spells; but a clever wizard can always get slightly better mileage by tweaking his spell selection slightly day-by-day. That sort of intellectual challenge sounds like it would appeal to your Harry as well.

As for Daphne, know that you are not alone. I struggle to picture a blonde-haired Daphne, to the extent that I managed to convince myself it's a glamour.

Have Fun, and Write Well!

loving this one

really enjoying this!

... So the purebloods should rule magical society but the muggleborns should have "the same opportunities" as the purebloods ?
You will have to explain to me how those two things are possible since the first one is in total contradiction with the second one.
If the purebloods are the head of magical's society just because they are purebloods, then muggleborns do not have the same opportunities as them.
Harry's speech made no sense at all.

I wish I could help you with the Beta Reading but I can't. In order to become someones Beta, you have to have published at least one story. I've never done that. I don't have that kind of talent. But, I did work in the composing room of The Daily Oklahoman Newspaper for eleven years, and we were sometimes used as proof readers. But, again, that doesn't qualify me to help you. Sorry.
Personally, I think your a good writer with one of the best authors name I've ever heard. I laugh every time I see it. Keep up the good work and thanks,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

I had forgotten how good your story is. Yes, I've read it a few years ago. I like stories where Harry is not going to be anybody's slave. Especially Dumble butts, or Snapes. And, your Harry is not a coward or a , taught me not to trust Dumble Butt in the first chapter of "The Sorcer's Stone", with ignoring the Potter's will, and doing nothing about Harry's curse scar. So, I've never trusted him in any way. There,of course, are stories on FFN where he is a good person but, for the most part "NO"! And Ron, I can't stand him. I hate lazy, bigoted people. Daphne, Hermione, Susan, Luna, and Gabby are my forvorite pairings with Harry.
Thanks,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

More please

lord muffin... it is I ...again...requesting...begging...for more updates. I hope that whatever issues you are facing right now will be over so I can once again marvel at the work you create. Please...come back...

Awesome fanfic. Two questions though, when you wrote about the Longbottom family's house elf, you only wrote about one. Does that mean that in your fanfic each family has only one house elf? There is no proof from the original books or movies to argue with that. If it does then I would be interested in seeing what happens to the Malfoy family when they lose their house elf. That is if your planning on freeing Dobby in your fanfic. Your fanfic, your choice. The second question is what about the Potter houses house elf? He/she might have died when Harry's parents did if you go by the theory that house elves have to be bound to the familys magic to survive. If not, than I think that Harry could make use of a house elf able to apparate through Hogwarts wards.