oh my goddd ill love u forever if u continue this stg

That was a sweet story.

cute!

No vas a hacer una continuacion?
Para que aparesca Lily "enamorada" de James pero el no la pezca y solo tiene ojos para Septima...

Aww! ;o)

Aaaaarghhhhhh, nooooooooooooo, this CANNOT be the end. Dearest Eye, kindly have mercy on us mere mortals, and explore this AU further, pretty please with a cherry on top? You’re a fantastic writer, and I only wish I could read more of this. :)

. . . more? . . . please?

Nice fic for a fem!Snape and James! I'd like to see more of this story and how Lily engages with them both. Her(Snape) and Sirius interacting since Sirius and James no doubt become friends too!

I love this story! Can you make a little mini story about them, like Lily finding out that Septima is James' soul mate and stuff. I think it'd be good.

While you're a good writer, I'm kind of disappointed by the ending. I mean I was looking forward to the change in dynamics between The Marauders and Septima, and for James to meet Lily, and for Sept to find out she's a witch too. Several things could happen after that; either James still half falls in love with her because he's eleven and has never wanted for anything, so he's not as mature as Sept so has no, or at least not much of a, concept of responsibility. Sept already knowing the feeling of abandonment would spiral into depression, also considering the fact that Lily has always been seen as perfect, it varies in my head after that, though James groveling is a very common scene. Another would be that Lily, ironically, falls for James and is jealous of poor, greasy haired Sept, and tries her very best to take him away, and Sept, finally experiencing happiness for the first time, isn't going down without a fight. Just wished you hashed the details out a lot more, so we could meet more chapters and have things added to the plot.

Any chance for more of this adorable pair? Their time at school and beyond?

nice!

Sequel for Hogwarts years, dating life, and Marriage and family life please.

Liked your story.

Are you thinking of making a part two at maybe a follow up story? I'd be very interested in reading about septima and James love story.