I loved this. Please keep writing.

That was a fabulous little vignette, a lovely companion piece to the movie. You had each character down pat- especially O'Donnell. This story added new insight to that fateful scene and certainly made it more interesting.

Your work is deffinetly some of the best fanfiction I've ever read. Your characters are true, the dialogue is great, and you really sell the thoughts and emotions of the characters. Keep it up! I want more!

This is a really great story! One of the best mummy fanfiction I've read in a long time!

Great job!

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wow, another excellent Mummy fic! Keep these coming! I really loved that movie. I wanted to write Mummy fics of my own, but I can't write that well _ Great job!

I loved it! I'm a huge Mummy fan and you really got the whole feeling of the movie. It sounds just like how Rick would really think and feel. If it were up to me I'd give it 5 stars.

Awwwww, how very sweet and cool!:) Totally loved it:)

Ohhhhhhhhh yeah. i've been waiting in hope for Mummy fanfiction to come out of the closet. And finally it has, THANK THE LORD. And more than that, it's GOOD FANFICTION. Yeeeeehaw. I am a sucker for cute romantic fluff-like pieces like this and the Mummy is so...so...fanfictionable, pardon me as I create a word. :) Oh oh oh oh. That was just splendid. Thank you so much! I cannot wait to read more!

cute! the mummy is one of my favorite movies! i've seen it about a hundred times! thanx for writing a cute story about it!

I Loved It! The characters were totally true to type, the dialogue wonderful.

This- "stumbling over those pesky invisible rocks that seem to be everywhere when you're in the bag. Even after only knowing him for a couple of days, I could tell that Jonathan was one of those guys who's in the bag so often all his mail is forwarded there." - was PRICELESS. Beautifully descriptive!

Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou.