I really enjoyed this, it filled in the blanks nicely. Good work. I know a lot of English people and you're right because OOOOH really does cover just about everything.

This is my third time reading this story (I have it on my faves list) and I still think it's great!

*coos, cries, and laughs at the same time* This is the BEST story...I always wanted someone to begin this scene. I couldn't understand why she would drink, when her character was perfectly obviously unused to drinking. The other thing that annoyed me was that she, altho this was probably the first time she had ever gotten drunk, never had a hangover. Now, someone should write THAT one...

it was cool, but it would have been better if you had made it more funnier, and made Evelyn talk like she was drunk.

This story kicks ass! It is absolutely perfect, 110% all O'Connell! Great job :)

Wow, you really make Rick's character so wonderfully realistic! Great job! :)

Sweet story! Keep up the good work!

Oh my...that was delightful. I have to say that you quite captured O'Connell in particular and the others quite well through his eyes. I admit frankly that I wasn't expecting "Mummy" fanfic, and I wasn't expecting it to be good - you proved me entirely wrong. Thank you for the pleasant surprise, and a nice afternoon's read!

Aww, wow. I enjoyed reading this very much. This was very original and I really liked how you had it from Rick's point of view. Doing it From Evelyn's would be kinda hard. I don't know how a drunk person thinks, but I'm sure it's scattered. There were a lot of cute sayings you used, like ass-over-teacups. And i really loved the itle and how you incorperated it in the story. Great job. Now i'll just have to be on a lookout for more of your stories! Did i mention i love this movie by the way? I watch it almost every night... Talk about obsessed... _

This story seems like a part of the movie! Ghost Rain is definitely one of my favorite stories!

Great story... found it very amusing! Love Rick's perspective, you gave him a great sense of humour, exactly as I would have imagined him to be.

WONDERFUL! A! I LOVED IT! IWAS WONDERFUL! I loved how you added a lot of other explanatory stuff to what was already there... you should do this wht other parts of the movie if you haven't already. Superb!

Wow! That was great! What a great title! You pinpointed O'Connell perfectly (in my mind atleast)! Great story!

I thought this was a wonderful piece. very consistent with the film, he characters were well drawn, the dialogue was appropriate and consistent with the characters, and flowed very well...there was no noticeable break between the film and the new interspersed lines. Motivation and descriptions both made sense and were extrememly well done. I throughly enjoyed it, and look forward to reading more of your work.

I don't understand them most of the time, I can't say what I want to say in front of them because they get offended, and if they frustrate me, which they usually do, I can't even punch them. Which is my usual solution when someone or something pisses me off.

"Sort of, yeah-I didn't want you to be, you know, cold, 'cause all you've got on is that flimsy... and I noticed you were... yeah." Stop talking, O'Connell. Just stop.

So I did what any good soldier does when he's faced with impossible odds. I turned tail and ran.

women never get to do anything but stay home and-and knit!"

Sorry, I had to tell you my fav parts. I think you should have done the ending different, but it was still damn funny. lol Great fic!