Reviews for Masquerade
TerriJ chapter 11 . 6/10/2018
I am very content!
TerriJ chapter 3 . 6/10/2018
What a fight! Yeah!
Guest chapter 11 . 7/20/2017
Great ending.
JellyBelly1210 chapter 6 . 7/22/2017
o crap ...what has Mac gotten himself into? bozer and riley will be so mad he left without them...but I think Jack will really be mad...especially mad if Mr. Punch knows that they are friends and somehow uses Mac against him. great chapter! I could feel the emotions...i like that when I read
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 11 . 7/20/2017
Wow Scary time for a bit .Creepy killer clowns. Jack and Mac fighting basically for there lives from these clowns .
The end had just the right touch . So glad Jack was able to help, the others and even the cat-panther survived. And got a nice place to live.
raine2460 chapter 11 . 7/19/2017
Happy to see the return of sally. As always another great story :) Looking forward to your next story.
JellyBelly1210 chapter 11 . 7/19/2017
what a great final chapter! I am happy George is alive and well taken care of
JustADreamer24 chapter 11 . 7/19/2017
How can this be over so soon? I feel like crying now. I need a new story from you ASAP. I loved this story so much. Mac's fear of clowns, the ammount of action, George and the emotional rollercoaster Jack had to go through. Marvelous job! I'm waiting excitedly for the next one!
Gib chapter 11 . 7/19/2017
Great job! Congrats on another entertaining story. Awesome job with this last chapter, you wrapped everything up nicely and had a perfect mix of emotions. Loved the vision of Jack trying to get out of bed, the somber feel of the funeral really came through and absolutely smiled at Jack and George. Tying it all up with the family barbecue and the Colts... Perfect! Awesome job with everything, thanks a bunch for sharing your story, I look forward to whatever you come up with next.
-Gib-
Soupsdone chapter 11 . 7/19/2017
OK, this was a four tissue ending. Still loving George. Can't wait for more stories from you, always my favorites
LottyCharl chapter 1 . 7/19/2017
I've enjoyed reading this story. However my heart stopped when the funeral started in this chapter, I thought it was Macs
Lhaven chapter 10 . 7/19/2017
Love all the action in this chapter, but the feeling of confidence that Jack and Mac would prevail. Phew! Our poor battered guys. And love George's important involvement!
Soupsdone chapter 10 . 7/19/2017
Love George.
Dlwells51 chapter 10 . 7/19/2017
Wow way to go for a climax! Yea George! You're fight scenes are almost too realistic to get through unscathed. Need to see how they wrap this circus up!
Objessions chapter 10 . 7/19/2017
Wow! Awesome action! So satisfied with the end of Punch! Now to patch up our boys and get everybody home. Sigh. Love it.
J
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