Like the story concept but you seem to be under the impression that speech has a full stop at the end of the speech marks. It's actually before.

An example of what you did: "Some written dialogue".

The grammatically correct way: "Some written dialogue."

Notice the full stop is within the speech mark. I checked chapter 2 and you have that problem there as well. Might be a good idea to brush up some grammar rules.

well, I didn't expect RNJR to be the team placement. Welp.

I can't wait to see where his goes. Keep it up

It's really good! I wasn't expecting much when I started and am pleasantly surprised with the results. Hope you update soon. Though, and this is only minor nitpicking, it feels like you are just describing the characters, not really telling a story, but that may be because it is a retelling or just the earlier part of the story. My nitpicking aside, it is somethimg fun to read! And Pyrrah was really unexpected!

I like this fanfic it's kind of a breath of fresh air? Anyways it's interesting to see how Ruby is the untrained protagonist.

awsome possum I like the sound of the brother sister thing with juane and Blake kind of had me curious

Nice twist
Can't wait for more

Oh yeah, keep up the great work! looking forward to the next chapter!

I only have one question: Is this story going to be seen through Ruby's P.O.V or Jaune's P.O.V? possibly a mix of both?

following

Now this is interesting. It's been done before but none were as good as this one.
Pls update soon

As long as you don't abandon this story you have my full support keep up the good work

Mhmm, yup yup yup. Definitely adding this to my follow list.