I love this prologue. I appreciate how you take the complicated quantum theories and make them sound like poetry. Absolutely adore this.

I adore what you've done with the characters. They are so alive and real that I am having a hard time remembering what part of the dialogue is from the TV series which isn't. Congratulations on a job well done!

Thank you for this story! I much rather like the Mary-survived version of s4!

I love this take on the confession scene with Irene Adler's text alert. Its heartbreaking for him to know he can't be the man for Molly.

:-(

This is the best ambulance scene I have ever read!

This story was so lovely. This is how it should have gone! When you were writing the characters it was perfect, they sounded exactly as they should. This is the story I've been wanting to read for so long. Thank you!

This is the most brilliant opening to an alternate-circumstance fic I have read in AGES. Excellent!

Finally getting caught up on your wonderful story. Oh, I like your version of events so much better than the original. Everyone gets to live happily ever after, more or less. And you kept everyone perfectly in character, too. I love all the bits from the original that kept reusing in the most delightful ways. Well done! Thank you for this!

Wanted to get back to this chapter and comment. This is a very lovely chapter and I like it that they cover some really important issues. I'm glad also that you show in the final montage that they are going to sincerely work on these issues in the future.

Loved your ending! Great idea to still do a montage at the end, and the last bit rounded it all out perfectly. You've done a fantastic job with this story!

Okay, I binge read this and I enjoyed it IMMENSELY. I wish things were like this in the series. Because Mary didn’t deserve that end.

I absolutely roared with laughter at “sincerely yours, Sherlock Holmes” and the fact that he already started repeating it :D
Such a human reaction to saying nonsense!

I love this universe you've built!

That was a really good, but spooky ending. I'm glad Mary and John worked things out and Molly and Sherlock are together. Great job!

This was an amazing story with an amazing ending. I loved every second of this emotionally true roller-coaster ride.

I was wondering about putting John in the tub, but it did give them a bit of privacy to talk. I hope things turn out of with them. Does the last chapter have something about what happened with Sherlock and Molly?