Oh, better watch yourself, Zim. GIR might actually fight you for Gaz. lol

This story was pretty funny. XD

OMG I think this is the best ZimxGaz fanfic Ive read so far! They were all so, in character, I could actually imagine this happening in the show!
Thank you!

It was just as well written as the other, honestly. It made me realize, looking back, that GIR definitely feels a kind of childish puppy love towards Gaz, which I never noticed at the time. Everyone was in-character and their interactions were highly amusing. :P

I can see this being an actual episode of the show. You have this really cool way of showing how the characters feel through their actions. And the way you write is so appealing! I love your voice throughout this piece, it gives it a kind of charm I don't see in other zagr fanfics. The setup is very cute. I'm happy to see that you noticed Gir has an innocent liking to Gaz in canon, and it's sweet how you took advantage of that small tidbit to start the story. I found myself chuckling at a few parts in the story, especially the end where Zim cowers under Gaz's teasing.
I'm gonna ramble a little bit, bear with me '
So, Zim and Gaz warming up to each other is hard to do due to their prideful, selfish, and extreme personalities. It's tempting to make them OOC for the sake of the ship and it's easy to just make them confess their love out of the blue. But in character wise? Their interest in each other has to be subtle and reluctant, otherwise they go out of character. Zim's musing in the end is exactly how he would suggest his intrigue with Gaz. I literally had to stop reading and take a breather. It was so Zim! I'm so glad that you understood that. Honestly you're one of my favorite writers already for establishing your knowledge and appreciation for these characters.
ok, end rant. What I thought of it? One of the gosh darn best ZAGR fics I've read my entire life. Keep on writing!
-spacensky

Really awesome story! It's in character and funny. I especially liked the ZAGR moment at the end. It's believable, and sweet.

Keep up the good work!

Love this story!
Very in character and hilarious to boot!
I love that ZIM admires Gaz in the end. I'm a big ZaGR fan!
Keep up the awesome work!

This was such a sweet story! :)

I thought it was a nice short fic that easily could have been a good episode of the actual show. Everyone seemed in character and the interactions i thought were very funny.

I think the main reason I enjoyed it was because everyone was in complete character :) It genuinely felt an Invader Zim episode.

I really liked it! I think my favorite part was that Gaz kept the drawing from Gir because it was really sweet XD I also really liked all of the other fairgoer's chaos and the people being flung off of the ferris wheel, it made me laugh (woo dark humor XD) all in all it is definitely one of my favorites that I've read _

I loved it! Everyone was in character- that's hard to come by nowadays. As I was reading, I found myself thinking "is this person one of the show's writers in secret?" Because it really did feel like I was reading an actual episode. It was so well done and Gir was just adorable.

10/10 would definitely read again :D

~ IWriteSins

I'm a fan of ZAGR as well, this story was enjoyable to read since Gaz msy have unknowingly started a bond with Gir, those two could hold a friendship due to their joined love for piggies and I was surprised that for once Gaz had "no hard feelings."

Guess even she can be merciful from time to time.

But my favorite part was Zim admiring Gaz, XD.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.