Reviews for Welcome to Hell
aintchick chapter 1 . 12/29/2017
I like the ending. I'm always a sucker for non-happy endings. That is, if the story is really good and do justice to the characters. The ending really fits the situation so I like it.
TFSTARFIRE chapter 42 . 9/17/2017
I'm not among those who are mad or angry, I in fact really liked the ending. I like a good story and this was a really good one.
TwoThings chapter 42 . 9/17/2017
This was actually handled well. Congratulations.
You ended it in a way that was both satisfying (for me) and conceivable. It was perfect. Not that I am not sad, but it was good. I'm impressed that you found 42 prompts to write on, and that alone is laudable. Again, congrats!
TwoThings chapter 41 . 9/16/2017
Really cute. I can't wait to see what you have planned next!
LittleBitty chapter 39 . 9/13/2017
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while.
This chapter was excellent and very well done! I can see your writing actually improving through this fic.
PlatinumCinders chapter 36 . 9/9/2017
I live to serve...
TT
That would make two of ous depressed over the baby 'cons...
PlatinumCinders chapter 35 . 9/3/2017
Megatron reflecting over the lost of the Decepticon Hatchlings after seeing the MiniDinobots playing around with Izzy and Cade, none the wiser to their audience.
Will just staying at his side, letting his silence comfort the Warlod on his grief.
Hekatea chapter 35 . 8/31/2017
It's good to see actual problems being handled with such finesse on fanfiction
:)
Request: Humanformers Megatron, Optimus, Bumblebee, Barricade and Hot Rod
Aliens Did It? - The cybertronian version of A Wizard Did It?
WTV, sooo: The mighty leaders and their youngest get a taste of the struggles that come with human size: Will facepalming A LOT, Cade with an eternally bemused smile plaste on his face, Bee & 'Cade actually being decent at the whole "being human thing" and Hot Rod - the youngest of the bunch and still (if barely) a minor - being inmediatly adopted by a ruthlessly delighted Vivian and kinda kidnapped to England (call us when you fix it, my baby and I are staying at Oxford)
O.O
Dunno, it came to me on a dream
But, on the bright side, at least Megatron is learning what's all the fuss about hugs from a hella happy Annabelle - William, I'm pretty sure I got the hang of this!
Julissya099 chapter 35 . 8/27/2017
Megatron is hella awesome on this one and I kind want him to adopt me..?
¿?
O.O
Prompt, pls: Bumblebbe, Izabella, Barricade & Annabelle bitching-about-parents get-together
(Tessa is at college or she would out-bitch EVERYONE)
Let them complain about wtvr their little heart/sparks want: Overprotective cybertronian dads, overprotective human dads, the other cybertronians of each side being assholes (lovable ones sometimes, but still assholes), cursing Will and Cade for explaining The Shovel Talk to Optimus and Megatron, school/lack of education on wartime, humans being weird, whose cyber-dad holoform is hottest, etc...
*Epilogue.-Hot Rod passes by and...just stops and stares but doesn't dare utter a syllabe -not even on french- due to fear of Vivian's (his tiny human mommy) wrath.
Everyone just silently agrees that my poor french son wins this one and quietly switch topics...
queenie chapter 32 . 8/25/2017
fatherly megs is adorable 3
run, bee, run!
TFSTARFIRE chapter 32 . 8/25/2017
Those two are a perfect pair and killing bumblebee is not a very good idea.
TFSTARFIRE chapter 30 . 8/25/2017
I was thinking the same thing
Daniella Of Yuss chapter 30 . 8/23/2017
Can I ask for: Annabelle coming angry/borderline on tears from school one day, Megsy founding her before Will, askig what's wrong - since she's usually as level-headed and even-tempered as the older Lennox - so Annie starts bitching about some girls on her class that spend the entire year trying to bully her and she never gave them the time of the day (despite being able to kill them 25 different ways with a mango - thank you, Decepticon self-defense training)
Until they started talking about Will as an incompetent parent (y'know, those mean girls who like to harpy "my daddy's richer and more important than yours")
So Megs - after internally disemboweling those miniature bitches for tinking themelves superior to his little girl - assures Annabelle that none of those idiots knows what they're talking about: As his Sparkling, Annie automatically becomes cybertronian royalty: All hail Lady Annabelle of Kaon, Daugther and Heiress of the Hight Lord Protector.
And -hiden from them, Will and the other 'Cons are listening-
Genma54 chapter 29 . 8/22/2017
hi
can I ask:
Lennox finding out about Drift's past -I don't know if you read the IDW comics, but Spotlight Drift and MTMTE, or even just the Wikia would explain it at lenght- as Deadlock: Megatron's favourite assasine (Tarn and the DJD were THE executioners/hunters while Deadlock fought on the frontlines)
Jelousy ensues since the Autobot Samurai is -canonically on the comics- considered quite beautiful for cybertronian standards
Transformersfan2005 chapter 29 . 8/22/2017
oh nice chapter !I was wondering if you'll make an aftermath after the chapter 18 : Hurt and I see that's the case :) I hope you'll write a lot of chapter again i'm a big fan of Megatron
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