nice

Nice five chapters

The original Sailor Scouts are horrible in this story! Why would they be so cruel to their best friend?
I hope Mars gets a redemption arc. It's sad to think of her and Sailor Moon's friendship ending over such a trivial thing.

I'm glad we finally know why the Sailor Scouts kicked Sailor Moon out, because that seemed weird. Maybe Lia Hiroshi mind-controlled them?

Wow, that shed light on a lot of things. I expected that Sakura would turn out to be Mika, but I never thought that Mika would end up being evil. I liked how powerful she was in the fight, as appropriate for the Sailor Corps' second-in-command. I still don't know who the villains are, though...if this is set after the completion of the series as this chapter implies, they'd have to be pretty powerful to stand a chance against Sailor Moon.

Well, I guess we're getting some answers next chapter.

The font you used for the monster's dialogue was really cool and creepy. I wonder who's behind these attacks, and what the monsters' goals are?

Getting pretty sure Sakura is Mika, considering she came right back in as soon as Mika disappeared.

Considering this is an American school, there sure are a lot of people with Japanese names.

I wonder if Sakura's more relevant to the story, or if she's just going to be Usagi's friend. Maybe she's Mika's true identity.

I wonder how John (Jacob?) knows Sailor Moon's identity, considering he's American. Has Mika been fighting against all these monsters by herself before Usagi showed up? I'd guess that would make her pretty experienced.

I wonder how Tokyo's holding up considering Sailor Moon is gone. I guess everyone else is still there, but Usagi was the most powerful.

All the Sailor Scouts are massive jerks, abandoning her like that! Even Chibiusa!?
I feel sorry for John, though, trying to take on a monster like that with an ordinary pistol. Good thing Sailor Moon showed up or else that would've been the end of him!

So great to read this update. I’m curious how Mamoru and Chibi Moon react to Usagi’s return. Love Sailor Earth saving the day.

i'm glad the scouts got what they deserved, but what about mamoru and chhibi-usa? does mamoru still have his memories and what did he do to betray her? i forgot.

I gotta reread this and I am so happy to have an update on my Birthday...

Had to reread this

Nice update I’m glad to see it.