I enjoyed reading this a lot but can't help but wonder about the Sylveon and what happened after with Eclipse.

Well, I must say it was a great story. Aside from some empty plot points and it feeling a bit rushed at times, I really enjoyed it. Thank you and I wish you luck in your future endeavors.

It’s a shame you only have a handful of reviews. I recommend making a K or a Teen rated story and enjoy the fact that with your writing skills, you can easily make a fanfiction worth at the minimum, 350 reviews. Also, try making the title and plot of the story something a lot of people would search for without a second thought of ‘wow, this is weird...’

Overall, your writing is amazing! Thanks for writing this!

Incredible job on this story. Gonna read the sequel right now! Just a few misspellings but nothing to complain about. Well done!

Bravo, simply bravo!

Was wondering what happened to the sylveon

Umm... Chapter 17 isn’t a sex scene? Are you sure?

About that Lucario transformation part, what about the metal back hand spikes and the metal chest spike, or are you just blanking over the sudden, likely painful, protrusion of metal from flesh?

Wow. Raped in the first chapter. That's a new one on me. Kudos to you I guess. This has already turned into the "female absol x male trainer" fanfic I was looking for, so thanks.

Great story, but is the only reason this story has 5 review because of the 'M' rating? You write well, so just write one T story and watch the reviews roll in.

You have talent but need practice. An tho the fucking was fun it got boring after chapter 4. I did like the story and would like to know what happens to Amp. Good luck.

[[pokespeak]

"speech"

*Thought*]

I guarantee you do not need this key. If basic actions aren't obvious from context, you're doing something wrong. Also, italics is standard for thoughts. Asterisks look weird.

You should separate your author notes with a horizontal line; otherwise, they look like part of the story.

Titling chapters in the story itself looks kinda weird; the dropdown menu should suffice.

You're formatting dialogue incorrectly. Dialogue is written as ["Hello," she said] or ["Hello!" she said], never ["Hello." She said] or ["Hello", she said] or ["Hello" she said]. This is because dialogue and speech tags are considered to be part of the same sentence, so they have to flow together. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb. In that case, the second part iis/i considered a separate sentence, so it's written as ["Hello." She grinned], never ["Hello," she grinned]. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like "laughed" or "giggled" is in the second category. (“Speak” is also not a speech verb.) Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's ["Hi," she said. "This is it."] not ["Hi," she said, "this is it."] or ["Hi," she said "this is it."] And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's ["Hi. This," she said, "is it."] The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don't use quotation marks (or single quotes) with thoughts. This is because quotation marks for thoughts make it look like your characters are talking out loud, which is confusing to the reader.

[I soon recognized my assailant as an Absol]

You're generally good about not capitalizing pokemon, but this shouldn't be capitalized either.

Switching POVs in the same chapter is really disorienting. If you must, you should use some sort of scene break symbol to show that something's changed.

Enjoyed this chapter alot keep up the good work

So I'd like to give you some tips to write better. I like what you have so far, but let me correct a couple of things. Firstly, "stay in this town for ever." Forever is a compound word, so you needn't the space.
I stepped up to the desk and asked "I need some pokeballs and camping gear." Firstly, you need a comma for this sentence after the ask. Also, it is not an interrogative sentence because you are not asking a question but demanding for something, so it isn't technically an asking word.
'...pounced down on me. Holding both of my arms...' I think you accidentally put a fullstop there mate :P Also, try to vary your word choice. Start sentences with different words. Other than that, you have done a good job sir! Please Pm me if you want me to help more with other chapters.

Holy fuck, you wrote 20 chapters and not a single review? Man, you deserve more attention. Nice work so far!