Yay! Claps. Applause! Excellent story. I’m sad I’m done, as this is the last of your stories that I’d read. I hope you do find time to write more.

Okay, that was unexpected. I love when stories surprise me

I think Malcolm has realized it may be *him*. I’m eager to see how he deals

This must be maddening for Malcolm. No matter what he tries, he make it worse. I can’t even guess at how this may turn out. Loving these scenes.

How in the world will Malcolm be able to prevent this? Very exciting

Good opening. Really grabs you

I was excited to see you posted a new story, so I first went back to read this one again. As fabulous as the first time around, so well plotted, suspenseful and clever. Poor Malcolm went through the grinder, and I'm glad he got some recognition for his bravery in the end, even if the brassheads denied him his medal. This is one of the funnest Malcolm-centric stories I've read. Now onwards to your new one! Hurrah!

I though I already reviewed this story but apparently not. This is one of my top 5 favourites of all the Malcolm stories out there (and yes, I read through many of them, if not most of them, when I first finished watching ST:Enterprise last year), and I've read it about three times by now.
You portrayed the characters from the show extremely authentically and I love the plot and how Malcolm's getting more and more desperate, while it just gets as repetitive as it has to be in a story about a time loop. It's just right. Perfect story!

This is a particularly good time loop story, in many ways. Your viewpoint character considers the cause of his situation more carefully that many protagonists who have found themselves in similar situations. Furthermore, you didn't belabor the point of repetetiveness. You established the time loop swiftly without employing the more frustrating techniques. And, once the loop was established and all apparently available solutions had been tried, you kept Malcolm well in character, endlessly determined (if miserably discouraged and convinced of the necessity of his death).
Mr. Reed was far more sensible in his approach towards explaining the problem than many of his fellow time-loop sufferers.

Thank you so much for this story, and for handling the characters as well as you have. I much appreciate your work.

Absolutely, excellent story! It was a thrill ride from beginning to end, bravo!

Hah! My suspicions about the eventual solution are solidifying. Malcolm got so close this time...!

Ugh, that was the most knuckle biting chapter yet. Poor Malcolm, I keep wondering from chapter to chapter how many more ways he can try to work this out. Wanted to kick Archer in his arse for being so hard on Malcolm without even considering what the cause for his actions might be...cudos to Phlox for standing up for Malcolm
Onwards!

This is such an awesome story, so cleverly plotted and so well told, and that knuckle-biting suspense from chapter to chapter. At the end of this one, I think I had an epiphany, I think I know what Malcolm has to do in the end. I'll have to keep reading to see if I'm right!
Seriously, this should have been an episode.

*STANDING OVATION*

...Now go and find Hoshi, Malcolm. You know you want to!

Well, thank heavens I can finally breathe again!