| Reviews for Hero Simulator |
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Pixelmiracle chapter 22 . 12/5/2019 Hello! Well i know the last update for this story dates back to a long time ago and i don't know if you'll ever read this message but i'll leave a review anyway. I don't really follow Yandere Simulator since the story in general is not that appealling to me (I don't really enjoy Yandere type character) but I have always been interested in the hero/villain dynamic which could exist between Budo and Ayano. And this fic did sooooo well depicting their clashing personalities and also the attraction between them. I don't even know how i came to enjoy Ayando but i always felt like a good story for them would be to keep them in character (like why the hell would Budo become yandere that does not make sense) and to have Ayano not commit any crimes for Budo to be with her (which is difficult) but this story did exactly that while keeping Ayano as a broken mess of a person. I just wanted to say this fic is amazing as well as your way of writing a story and characters. Their depiction is really well done. I love Taro the most here actually (apart from the main characters), he finally has a real personality and we understand why so many girls might like him. Strangely I also appreciate Osana even though i usually hate tsundere, i suddenly wish she could become a good friend to Ayano. Anyway, i am always excited to read the next chapter. Whether you will continue this story or not i just wanted to say thank you for this amazing plotline and character development. I wish you all the best in the future! ) Pixelmiracle a stupid girl stupidly in love with this story |
PastelBatch chapter 22 . 2/5/2019 I love your story so much! I hope you continue it again soon! |
nativeziam chapter 22 . 10/8/2018 Quick question, are you going to continue this fic? Because it's soo good. Seriously it's probably one of the best fics I've read in a long time, and that's saying a lot for me. The concept of time travel in Yan Sim had me hooked by the first two chapters, and what with poor Budo trying his best to prevent all of the murders and the excellent characterization of all the characters I literally could not stop reading until I finished it. The slow burn between Budo and Ayano is so good and so perfectly agonizing, I definitely feel for all of the poor pining he has to go through. All the guy did was fall in love with a potential murderer and try his darnest to save her from murdering people, and yet I love it so much. There's a vulnerability to Ayano that isn't in the game itself that you've got down to a T here, and it's wonderful because it's completely different from her absolute devastation in the first chapter and main game when Taro rejected her. Here she actually gets to experience love itself from Budo, and so her reactions aren't a product of a twisted obsession but instead from her as a person. I find it refreshing, and really interesting because she's still clearly Ayano, she still has her homicidal urges and stalks Taro and would definitely have killed Osana and the others if not for Budo foiling her plans, but this Ayano has had a second chance and someone who genuinely cares about her and is actually interested in her. I love fics where people take the most unexpected ship and make their own twist on the story, because seriously you turned Budo who was only this club leader you could only interact with impersonally a few times in the game into this complex, determined protagonist who only wants to right the girl he loved's wrongs and save everyone from her including herself. Like can I say, it's nice to read him having his own personality and backstory, and man is it cute how obvious his crush on Ayano is. I'm surprised it took Info-chan pointing it out to her for her to even realize it based on how Budo basically turns into a tomato around her. And don't think I haven't noticed Ayano getting confused at how Budo makes her feel, Yan-chan you are not smooth. I just hope Info-chan doesn't get through to her on manipulating him. Clearly, I could go on and on about this fic, but I'll just stop here before I blabber on even more. If you do come back to ever finish this story, just know you'll definitely have many people including me interested, I'm sure. |
Guest chapter 22 . 7/28/2018 Hoi |
I LOVE DIS STORY chapter 22 . 6/16/2018 Make more! |
abacus chapter 22 . 5/22/2018 It's one of the most heartwarming fic I ever read. Thanks for writing such an amazing piece of work in this Fandom! I hope you still plan to continue on writing this story :) |
Guest chapter 22 . 3/11/2018 Until next time ;-; I'm waiting ;-; for a long time actually |
Dav009 chapter 22 . 3/10/2018 Please update your story |
Luna-Lua chapter 22 . 2/28/2018 Oh god, this story is sooooo gooood! I'd love to read the next chapter soon! ~ |
Guest chapter 22 . 2/25/2018 I really love this story, it's amazing! Please continue! |
Lovely Dork chapter 17 . 1/29/2018 Okay i had to go back and reread this chapter. It just sends chills down my spine. Is Budo going to end up in the basement? And the parallels between what Budo is doing for Ayano and what she is doing for Taro (OMG). And that bit earlier with Midori and YandereDev changing the game? Brilliant! The detail in this story is amazing! |
Lovely Dork chapter 22 . 1/29/2018 So this story is the first thing in a while to truly pull me in. You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to see what Info-Chan has planned for poor Budo and what Ayano does about it. I hope you had a wonderful break and I can't wait for the update! |
Lovely Dork chapter 10 . 1/29/2018 I'm hooked. I can't put this story down! You're an amazing writer and I love the pacing of this story. And Info-Chan? Omg! I'm not going to get any sleep until o finish this story. |
FooFaFie chapter 22 . 1/15/2018 *SQUEEL* I really like this so far ( I totally ship ayando now!) I can't wait for the next chapter! |
awesome chapter 22 . 12/21/2017 good luck and hope to see more this is amaizing :) |