| Reviews for Doom Slayer of Zero (Old version) |
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  Guest chapter 2 . 6/18 Disappointing. Your personality and ambition doesn't fit in doom slayer author. |
| K chapter 1 . 9/3/2019 Good |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2018 Your story blew, after bonding DG and Louise together, and Perseus12 is a big goddamn gay boy |
 tomahawkESP chapter 7 . 12/12/2017 Just about to finish the story and I get this! You might as well as put a link to Rick Ashley’s NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP! |
| Hitler's Moustache chapter 3 . 11/12/2017 bit of Trivia. Doomguy last name is blascowicz it's is confirmed that's he is the Canon great grandson of William Joseph blascowicz. |
| pepijn30 chapter 7 . 11/12/2017 done fixing? |
| Diavolo chapter 7 . 11/10/2017 Your spelling needs tremendous work. |
| Neema Amiry chapter 7 . 11/10/2017 can't wait |
| Perseus12 chapter 6 . 11/10/2017 Wowsers! Please continue the story, the excitement thrills me! |
| Inferno999 chapter 6 . 10/14/2017 Hmm, really good EXECUTION for the story, get it? get it? :D Ok, I will get the fuck out of here...BUT FIRST! I need to say that I really enjoy the story so far, gotta say you really...DOOM the characters, ahahahaaa~...Ah I will kill myself. ¡OK! TIME TO STOP! I hope to see the next chapter soon. The ends was shocking and I want to see what's next. SEE YA! PLS UPDATE SOON! INFERNO999, OUT! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/13/2017 please make more an will he get love if he does get forquet or if a harem |
| RStreighart chapter 6 . 9/27/2017 Damn the language barrier, I'm still gonna read. Once I sort some things out with my PC, I could help here and there |
| Ranger McAleer chapter 6 . 9/21/2017 Bloody amazing (literally) can't wait for next chapter |
| Neema Amiry chapter 6 . 9/18/2017 badass |
| joshua.obryan.549 chapter 6 . 9/18/2017 if you want a critique of the grammatical structure all you need to do is ask, so allow me to help you first off, there are frequent misspellings, allow me to highlight them, but first, don't take offence to anything I say in this chapter, one was supposed to be spelled tried, you but in try ed, another is haded near the ending, it was supposed to be had, still a great effort put into Americanizing your spelling. there is some grammatical errors as well, at the ending, he made all the job by himself, you were meant to put in he did the job all by himself, another one that might make more sense grammatically when you put she couldn't understand why did he spare her, a better sentence would be, she didn't understand why she was spared still, for a foreign writer trying to translate to English for probably the first time, I generally found I could understand you very well, you don't have to be sorry for making mistakes, writing is aa learning process |
