Lovely story! I adore the "5 times..." trope and you wrote it excellently. Absolute pleasure to read!

Thank you for the laugh. I liked the way the bridge crew messed with Kirk. He took it as intended as good natured fun. It was a nice way to show the professional & personal relationship they share. I liked the way he put the Klingons in their place before giving in to personal injuries. However, the ending where Spock loudly announced “Captain on the bridge” and Kirk’s reaction was a laugh out loud moment. Priceless. Thanks for that.

This is amazing and hilarious and I love it

I never forget this chapter, simply because of the last six lines. Perfect!

You have captured everyone perfectly. Great story.

Again-this is excellent. The crew interactions, the family bonds you are able to convey, and the way you intersperse humour and angst without lessening either, takes a great deal of skill. Well done.

Fucking love you’re stories!

Thank you for a wonderful story.

This is great! Thanks for writing. You really captured the flavor of the characters (either as they are, or as I wish they were).

Thank you very much. I like your style. You have adventure an fun. I love the way you write about them. Captain on the bridge. :)

This was on Tumblr! The thing, where they fight to yell Captain on the Bridge first, and you actually put it into a fic, you BLESSED SOUL. I love it.

Love how your characters come alive.

This reminds me a lot of Spock's reaction to Kirk's death at the end of Amok Time. I really liked this.

I can definitely see this Kirk acting like this. He's so messed up by Tarsus and the rest of his childhood. Loved how the truth came out.

'After-dinner mints.' Perfect!