The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all of the elements related to the reader and replace them all with any canon character or original character. Switch to the first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed like Archive Of Our Own or deviantART.

Honestly, I loved your story and all that comes to mind now is to say thank you for sharing your amazing writing

What is that (Y/N) stuff?

Yasss you updated! *insert ridiculous dance moves*
I love your story, the update just made my day better

Awww, I hope she gets in touch with Danny before he does indeed do like Ward threatened.

But, on another note... Foggy! Didn't see that coming, but love it!

This is an awesome story! Please continue this! :)

*laughs* "Yes, Mom!"

Considering her ex is a member of The Hand, I worry about her going back to work. I am also eager for Danny's reaction when -he- finds out said ex was a member of The Hand.

Haha, yeah, little does the reader know. There is a can of worms with Ward's name on it.

Wonderful chapter! Everything about it was so fluid & captivating.

*shudders* This line: "Earned with blood and paid in shadows." So poetic sounding.

I know I often use this word to describe your writing, but this chapter had ALL the intensity. Your writing style, though, is just so absorbing.

Great chapter! I especially loved Ward being protective & for punching Josh.

Oooo...Best chapter yet. So much tension. Again, love the dialogue and descriptions; I feel like I'm right there.

(Way too lazy to login lol)
But oh my goodness I am absolutely loving this story! I love how you've written your main character and the interaction between Danny, Ward and well, the reader! Keep up the awesome work!

Hi! I just read your whole story instead of working. Because it was so great! I love how you write the original characters and just the way the writing goes in general it's interesting and well done. Thanks for sharing your story. I can't wait to see more. Thanks again !

Another great chapter! I really love your writing style...It's very engaging. I can't wait till Danny finds out the ex is a member of the Hand.

I'm so glad you updated! This was a very intense chapter.

I can't get over your descriptions & how perfect the characterizations are for Danny & Ward. Really great job!

Aww, this was an enchanting scene.
Looking forward to the next one, to find out their reaction.