Quite the twist they found!

Oooh, bit of a twist there.

Hmmm, may be all by the books but there may be more...

Interesting, interesting. Let's see where this leads.

Oh ho ho ho, the plot thickens!
That's quite the twist.

And poor Nick.
Granted, I was expecting something to happen to him; I guess I should be grateful that he just got detained instead of kidnapped and hurt for real. He put himself into a pretty precarious situation, after all.

Still, it's gonna be a shame to not have him around for the time being. His snark and perceptiveness always add so much to every scene.
Ah well, maybe there are still some things he can do on his end.
I'll have to wait and see, I guess. ;D

Great job with the chapter, as usual!

Tensions running high?

Oooh, spying simon! Naughty naughty. Some interesting characters being introduced along the way, though the big thing was Nick's hustle going all the wrong for Judy. I'm curious to see how that ends up going!

Nick's past being revealed?

Also, will Nick encounter a vixen in this?

Oof, this chapter was intense.
First Nick and Judy fight, then Simon wants to fight Nick and then Judy really blows up on Simon.
At least now that it's all out on the table, they can maybe try to work things out.
(The poor souffles though. They sounded delicious. Rip.)

But I get the feeling that things will get worse before they'll get better; especially between Nick and Judy, now that his lie has had some real consequences. Judy will be angry with him, and since there was already quite a bit of tension there, I'm pretty sure they're gonna have a pretty bad fight about this.
I hope his afternoon was more successful than hers, if nothing else. They could use some positivity.

I really enjoy your updates and your long chapters! They're always very layered and so detailed; I can tell how much work you must be putting into this story. I really appreciate it, and I love your characterisations!
Thank you for all your hard work!

Van alley neighbourhood, lol.

Nice. Some good characterisation of Nick, too.

Ahh, I really enjoyed Nick this chapter!
Man, being surrounded by racist pricks like that can't be easy. I hope Judy won't leave him alone with Simon much more often.
That's rough, buddy.
"Help Nick from killing Simon"? More like "help Nick kill Simon", haha. ;D I'd absolutely help him hide the body too.

He's handling it well though, all things considered!
I'm sure his hunch will turn out to be right; after all, they say to always trust a fox's instinct!
I'm sure he's on to something.

Please reupload the chapter, it is all code... you've been code a few times now...

Also, why has it taken you 2 years to give us a new chapter. I am pretty most people have forgotten about this story by now, so you should just delete it and move on, since you will probably not finish it.

You need to re-submit this. It's unreadable

please change the format of this chapter all i can read are line like p class"MsoNormal" style "margin : ... html coding soooo please

You have a brilliant set up to what seems like the beginnings of an EPIC story to come — I can't express how excited I am, your storytelling is engaging, your writing is awesome, I'm looking forward to the next update!

You have a brilliant set up to ehat

This is a very well written crime story. I have my own theories on who was in the apartment, but I’ll hold onto them until a later date. (TBH probably gonna forget them after I post this review, but whatevs...). The partner aspect of the fox and bunny is strong and friendly. Fantastically written, if I must say.

I eagerly await more developments in the happytown case.