Reviews for Wretched State
amaranthinne chapter 1 . 8/19
I don't even know where to start. This is such a great and well-written story. Really. It is so much darker than I though it would be. And so so angsty. I can't. All I can think about is how Reborn saved Tsuna in this story. He supported him in so many levels in a way Iemitsu was never capable of doing in all Tsuna's life. I think it's worst to have a dad and can't count on him than doesn't have one. Iemitsu is infuriating in this story. And Reborn and Tsuna's dynamic it's perfect. The fact that Reborn turned out to be Tsuna's sun in this story is heart-warming. Lastly, I love this piece endlessly. thank you for sharing, dear. It's spot-on in the feels and made me want more.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
...bruh
That was intense
Thank you for writing!
secretwhovianpony chapter 1 . 3/17/2019
Ouch. The sheer bitterness of this story is overwhelming.
KuroHinata chapter 1 . 11/29/2018
worse than what I thought. the frozen terror/death seen everyday before taking a meal. i hope he doesn't have food-mental related issues. sniff.
toosoonforthis chapter 1 . 7/18/2018
Amazing in an absolutely heartbreaking way! Thank you for sharing this ~
Dawnsty chapter 1 . 5/22/2018
I loved this story! 3
Reading the last line made me want to read more. I especially liked Reborns and Tsunas dynamic and how you portraied them.
Akira Daiyamondo Suta chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
Iemitsu was getting on my last nerves at the end of the chapter.
You find out you wife has been dead for five year and your son has been alone and abandoned basically for those years.
Your son used the zero point break through at a young age and is basically traumatized by what has happened.
He has been alone and basically dead for year and all you can do is tease Reborn about being Tsuna’s sun guardians
Sakihinata chapter 1 . 2/24/2018
Wow, that's a sad one... Extremely well written ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2017
I still come back to read this once in awhile...Amazing as always...
I do still wish you would have explored this verse more. I would love to read a multi chap fic version of this.
jeannette.rothenberger chapter 1 . 10/30/2017
...ouch...
Ireland Scott of BROH chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
Awwwwww!
Metria chapter 1 . 7/21/2017
I totally didn't expect this story to be so dark.. you're successfully put the feels in the most brutal(in a good) way,. like.. I'm speechless, holy,.. what? WHAT?

great story anyway, you got yourself a follower ~
Jazebeth chapter 1 . 7/13/2017
This is such a well written story! Unique and there's no plot hole either! Beautifully written and isn't drawn out like how other stories tends to be. Good job, this is a really good one shot.
Arrysa Clair chapter 1 . 7/4/2017
You caught my interest that I have to review even when this is only a oneshot. Anyways, I like the plot because Nana was murdered, Tsuna forcibly awakened his sky flames to perform Zero Point Breakthrough, couldnt tell anyone about his Mom's death so he suffered for years and that tugged at my heartstring then bam Reborn appears and I can say "thank god" he did. I can also say I dont care if Tsuna didnt become Neo Vongola because *squee* Reborn acting as a trustworthy person after Tsuna's long suffering (alone and fuck you Iemitsu, you idiot)
I thought Reborn was acting like an overprotective papa bear because he couldnt bear to think a suffering baby sky then you revealed he was Tsuna's sun guardian and now I am in cloud nine singing praises. Thank you for this story. The time leap/transition is sudden and disorienting but overall I have no complaint so far.
Alyss Penedo chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
Oh my God. Oh my god oh my god oh my god did that just
*Weeps*
I am an endless litany of screaming inside, what have you done?
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