Very well written. That was one of the more boring episodes and I'm glad you gave it a much better ending where all the sisters learned their lesson

I could give you an idea if you want.

you know what shits me? How after that eposode the next one has the van in mint condishon ... well ...the same CARS YOU CRIS SARVINO GOOD THING YOUR FIRED

I like this, there just isn't enough good fics where the Loud parents actually do their jobs as parents and lay down the law!

Good story. Loved the family moments :)

User, gumball2 recommended I check out this story of yours, and I must say, excellent alternate take on The Sweet Spot episode! Though I'm sorry Lincoln's leg got broken, I think it really taught his sisters how mean they've been to him and how they should try to treat him better in the future. Also, I figured Vanzilla would be getting totled after something like that, honestly, I'm surprised that van has held up for as long as it has in the span of the show! Especially that episode where they're literally, having to push it down the street. Yeah, I believe that's Vantastic Voyage, if I'm remembering correctly.

Anyway, keep up the great writing! I'll have to check out more of your stuff down the road!

That's a darker twist on the episode and a hard way to learn one's lesson. But it was good none the less.

Wait! This is good, but would you consider doing a 'What if' one-shot series?

But they still contained to fight over petty things in many episodes after this

nice one shot of one of my favorite episodes :)

That was beautiful. 10/10

Heh, well that was feels inducing mate. You got me.

I'll be honest, I didn't see it coming. I guess that's what got me the most. Yeah, darker retellings are common, but hey, it's a thing.

Though, i feel you could've been more heart breaking had he been injured worse... (I'm legit trying to get my mind off the fact I'm typing this in a hospital right now.)

Anyways mate, great job. I rate 10/10!

Amazing! I'd like to see much more from you!

woah intense but really i remember thinking way back when well linc did take the time to find that spot

This is REALLY good. His sisters are the ones who should learn something, not Lincoln. Its that not everything is yours, let that person have it because he EARNED it for pleasure and treasure. That means Lincoln deserved everything he wants after everything he suffered through since he's born neglected and only male.