please go on.

*starts sobbing uncontrolably* You killed Domon! Don't...how...could...you...kill...him...?

NO! Why did he have to die! It was a short chapter, but it was awesome! *tear*

-Llyod

DAMN YOU!I HATE YOU RIGHT NOW So... !

*sobbing hyterically* thank you. . .so much. . .it's about damn time Rain grew a backbone this strong. I think she roxx. - Oh, btw, u might wanna use Good Charlotte's 'riot gurl' as part of it just cuz it sorta fits rain's new character

no! why'd domon have to die? NO! it was a fantastic story...excpet for one thing tat i really didn't like: when domon died...(i dont like it when charcters die) of course, hideo is an exception...but it was kinda like history was repeating itself...older brothers killing eachother and younger brothers killng eachother...

i luv it so far! can i have kenichi? he's such a sweetheart! *pouts* i want kenichi! .~

i liked it but i think allenby's last name is beardsley...that's what i write anyway, so...yeah

I really wished you hadn't made it so sad. That made my cry very much; you have a way of getting into people's hearts with your writing. I don't what is but you definitely have something going on there. I really hope you update When You Aren't Enough soon and this story was really awesome. Keep it up. Later.
~Shuffle Queen~

She can be!

really really good

anime-eagle

grr... why didn't my whole coment get posted? i didnt say anything bad . actually, to sum it up, you've done wonderfully once again.

-angry for only a fourth of her comment got posted, even leaving out letters(weird!), loves anime, domon and rain together, and Legolas,-Sailor Hannah

ah! I NED AN EPILOGUE! please continue, it can't be finished .

Oh no! How sad, Rain is in deep trouble...

Good story man the last part was really sad.