Well, I still enjoy Tellius fiction, and I'm glad to read it. I even still write some of it too. But I digress.

I liked this story, quite honestly. I was never fully invested in the Naesala/Leanne pairing myself in game, but there's still something sweet about their relationship. I still hate him though for all the stuff he's pulled, even if he did have his reasons for it. But at times there's something to pity in him. And, I like that you show even Naesala wondering if Leanne will follow her brothers' and Tibarn's lead at start hating him, but he's going to enjoy it while at lasts. Leanne does seem like a light in his life, and you portray that well.

Glad you posted this. We need more Tellius writers. Well done.