Reviews for Akira, Hikaru, and The Closet
Geny789 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Update I want to read more!
TheOrchid chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Wow... thanks for not updating... *cry*...
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
The last part... scary... Touya, nice well-mannered Akira turned into a wild beast... o.O because of Hikaru. Of course.

The closet. I had to muffle a laugh when I read it and its... double entendre. Akira and Hikaru in the closet... when will they come out? *snicker*

Update? XD
Cross - The Damned Alchemist chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Hahaha! W W W It's very good! I'm enjoying it very much! ~ Please write more soon! I am looking forward to the next chapter A LOT. ~ Heheh!
Kidiu chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
Aw, man, this is awesome! Sad that you didn't update after only one chapter, but I really hope you'll continue this someday!
are-en1 chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
You knoe for someone make just 1 chapter and get 50 reviwe it was you think is time to updated to your faithfull reviwer?I wish all my fic has thsi many will encorage me to make more
aoh chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
not continued, sadly enaugh, but it was fun
BloodyNeutral chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Haha xD hilarious.. :D When will you update? :o It's really good
kataru chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
WAAHAHAA! where's the continuation?1! T_T don't leave this hanging! *look at the date 2-24-03* ... T_T ... aargh !1 it's a waste for such promising story... T_T
Captain Starseeker chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
oh i like, i like indeed. And that kinda pinch hurts like a bitch! LOL, when Touya was talking about hikaru and no brain thing, i was thinking "Ohh i would so step on his foot." and then it happened! I loved it! The hips comment was what dragged me to read it!

Keep up the great work and update soon PLEASE

Loyal fan and captain

starseeker
rebecca85 chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Tbc? TBC! It's been fucking two years! (sorry, I just read another fic that ended in a total cliff, so I'm kinda venting now)

WRITE Y0U DAMMIT! This has a nice beginning, greatly expressed those two and all. Continue!

Mata ne~

Luv, rebe
kari2500 chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
they're fighting in a closet, i should have expected that.

silly, akira.

silly, hikaru.

well anyway, it was fun to read this.

they actually sounded In Character. _

its a fun story and i hope you keep writing, cause i want to read some more.

so, please do.

_ Kari
Halkatla chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Ha ha! XD

Update! Pwease?
Ka Tokubi chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
O Oho!

That's funny!

Actually if I was Akira I'd probably grab the Hikaru thing and jump in a closet but then again if I were Akira I'd be a famouse dude and then the janitor would ask for my autograph as payment and let us go, then again the janitor maybe doesn't play go so then I'd still go jump in a closet. Only a stupid rude Hikaru would be stupid enough to try and _talk_ our way out especially with his language and my hair we'd probably get mistaken for gangsters and put in a police station... I rewriting your fanfic... sorry!

You have a good funny fic.
Kiwee chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
oh ouch! poor hikaru...*winces*

this is so suggetive...*drools*
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