| Reviews for Million Dollar Loud |
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PLEASE chapter 4 . 4/15 UPDATE PLEASE! I LOVE IT! |
Lil Swazy chapter 4 . 12/29/2018 Wow great chapter! I’m loving this continue |
Moon-5555 chapter 4 . 9/20/2018 Are you seriously gonna end it here? HERE!? WE DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO LANA! Please...just, PLEASE, don't let it end here. I don't care if it's a lie, just promise this isn't where it ends... |
z chapter 4 . 4/5/2018 Please make more! Need to see what happen next! :) |
Austin couture chapter 4 . 10/7/2017 I love this story I can't wait for chapter 5 and Lori should come in and help Lucy. |
celrock chapter 4 . 9/26/2017 Well, interesting to see Luan with a daughter, sorry her marriage didn't work out though. And Lynn? In a wheelchair? And here I thought she died in the car accident... Glad that wasn't the case... Anyway, keep up the great writing! I look forward to reading more, when it's available! |
celrock chapter 3 . 9/26/2017 That was nice to get an appearance from Lincoln, and congratulations on him becoming a father to four daughters! Hmmm, I wonder if Lucy's sister-in-law is Ronnie Anne? It was also nice of Lincoln to help Lucy redye her hair, as surely seeing herself with black hair is helping her to feel more like herself. Keep up the great writing! |
celrock chapter 2 . 9/26/2017 Wow, this story is getting good! Though I do feel bad for Lucy here. And, I'm going to take a guess as to what happened to Lana and Lynn Junior, while Lucy survived in the car accident, even if she was in a coma for 18 years, Lynn Junior and Lana were killed. Keep up the great writing! |
celrock chapter 1 . 9/26/2017 Woe! Quite an interesting start thus far, and I look forward to reading more! This story was recommended to me by user, Boris Yeltsin. Anyway, keep up the great writing! |
Tziput13 chapter 4 . 9/26/2017 I've actually followed this one since last February, so imagine how happy I was when the email for this new chapter popped in my inbox - and oh my, what a chapter! Just on the same level as the previous three if not better. I really like your writing style, especially the way you build dialogues: they feel extremely natural, which is not something easy to do, especially if we're talking about grown-up versions of the characters we all know. Every time someone says a word I simply have to smile: I can perfectly picture the scene in my head! And the plot! You know very well how to leave little clues here and there without revealing too much of what's changed eighteen years later, and this helps a lot in both understanding how Lucy herself feels and keeping a reader enthralled. We learn something new little by little and as a result these about 8000k-words-long chapters don't feel long at all - they even leave me wanting for more. I can only wait for future, excellent chapters from you. Keep up the good work! |
Guru115 chapter 4 . 9/22/2017 Really loving this so far, even though Lucy 's troubles seem to keep piling up. Can't wait to see if my guess about why Lori seemed upset when she heard Lucy was awake is right or wrong. Either way, I'm sure it will entertaining. :) |
A.T. Gunn chapter 3 . 9/21/2017 I'm really enjoying your work here. It would seem that Lincoln is just who Lucy needed. Then, of course, they were always close. |
Jairo De la Croix chapter 4 . 9/21/2017 This is a pretty good story! |
Jack of harts chapter 4 . 9/20/2017 Luna is single, I guess Sam didn't exactly work out |
PokeTennyson25 chapter 1 . 9/20/2017 Very interesting premise. |