This was lovely. Thanks for writing it!

Loved 98% of this story. The progression of Emma & Regina's relationship was so well done. From kinda friend with something underlying, to maybe one-sided feelings to mutual, to complete vulnerability and trust. Henry was awesome in this- still him but more mature and cheeky. I loved the various other characters and all the various relationships & friendships. Really great interplay and thought there. Seriously there was so much that was wonderful. Robin Hood and Hook were pretty much comically overdone in their prickness, but I could have even gone along with that. However, the end really disappointed me. There was basically no point in having Robin reappear to take them to court besides having him yell and act crazy yet again. There was a huge missed opportunity for the baby to really have been Emma's. After all, he had very blond hair, there were town theories (that Emma certainly wished were true), Robin was contesting his rights which would have actually required a DNA test, AND it was a wish baby not bound/created by science (Henry definitely didn't think about Robin, his wish very specifically included the three of them.) Overall I really liked the fic, but will not continue to the sequel since I see it centers on my least favorite parts of this.

Really love this story!

I am reading this and loving this so far! Kudos

I liked it but there is no reason Mulan must get used to Mulan Fa as in the RL China, and Japan and many other Asian countries do not use the given name before the family name.

Awesome story!

Love it

Very nice. I loved seeing Regina go all cuddly because of the pregnancy hormones... there were so many great little things in this, like Mulan commenting on her Disney movie and Ruby's gay pride baby clothes, that made it feel like a story with real supporting characters.

It is 4 am here now and I have just power-read through this marvelous story of yours! I didn't dare slow down to comment on each chapter because I was trying to finish it as fast as possible so I could read the sequel...sorry! Your writing is superb, witty, funny, interesting and your plots can't be beat by anyone! Well done, Lunatic!

I really liked this story. Nice job with the writing. I’m wondering if you did a part 2 for this ? I love Swan-Mills family stories. I’ll be checking out some of your other stuff.

This tela is one of the best that I have the pleasure of reading thank you so much.

Kudos
Love this story, full of all kinds of emotions.
Enjoying your writing abilities.
Thank you

Thank you very much for sharing. Your writing is fascinating. You caught me from the first chapter. please, whatever it is, keep writing :D

Oh the fanily feels!

Great story...love your writting