| Reviews for Treacherous Affairs |
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riversgirl75 chapter 31 . 7/27 Wow! Thank you for altering the ending. But. Wow! You’re a tremendous writer! |
ElizColl chapter 4 . 11/15/2019 What in the name of Slytherin’s slippers - I love it! And I also love from a little acorn mighty trees grow. (I’m now reading all of your stories after discovering your most recent one with “terminally ill” Hermione. (My bet’s on the crazy healer being, er, crazy and wrong.) love your peppy fun-loving writing style and am having fun going through your fics. |
Frozen Darkness 88 chapter 31 . 8/5/2019 Great story and I was beyond pleased to see Pansy get hers. Onto the sequel! Much Love! -daMichi Goddess |
Slimmette chapter 18 . 7/5/2019 I’m not sure why but my favorite pairing here is actually Draco and Ginny—their chemistry makes their scenes are totally hot! Please consider doing a naughty Drinny fic, it would be epic. |
madatcarri chapter 31 . 6/8/2019 Glorious writing. Thank you for your wonderful story |
blueeyedsue chapter 31 . 5/28/2019 I really liked this adaptation of Dangerous Liaisons/Cruel Intentions via Hogwarts. You made me wait an awfully long time for Dramione lemons, but the wait was worth it! I'm glad the ending was happier too. I'll be looking into the sequel. |
TheLastLynx chapter 31 . 5/25/2019 This was really enjoyable. I liked what a bitch Pansy stayed throughout. now I'm curious what will happen to Harry. |
TheLastLynx chapter 28 . 5/24/2019 Oh, the dramaaaaaa |
TheLastLynx chapter 26 . 5/24/2019 You did well on the angst, I think. they all react pretty destinctly to their various problems. |
TheLastLynx chapter 25 . 5/24/2019 I've commented on your characters before and I'm sorry, I have to again. The way you describe their thoughts is very distinct, I like that, you make the differences clear. It's more telling rather than showing, but it works. Similar with the confrontations: I don't know either of the references, but you took a lot of care to give emptional depth and individual motivation to every character. So you've probably guessed it-this comment is more of a stream of consciousness which is growing as I'm reading the chapter (sorry for that). McGonagall looking squinx-like is the bomb! |
TheLastLynx chapter 24 . 5/24/2019 I really feel for Dracoat the same time, it was a disaster waiting to happen. Compartmentalising is not a fail-safe method, espcially if someone like Pansy just worships chaos and the power she gets from sowing discord. I really hope Lavender will be kind to Theo, he really did the least objectionable thing. and also: can someone please do something about Pansy? As a charcater, she's great; but as a reader rooting for the main characters, I just hope that Hermione discovers the vicious streak she has in canoncough* Marietta Edgecomb *cough*) |
TheLastLynx chapter 23 . 5/24/2019 Living for the Pansy drama not gonna lie. told you I was odd and that's it's only Drinny that gets to me. |
TheLastLynx chapter 20 . 5/24/2019 Yeah so that's what I get for starting a story at 2 in the morning. i read up about the bet on Wikipedia and I'm feeling slightly less uncomfortable about the whole seduction bet. it's a bit silly, really; I usually like if there's tension in a story, yet Drinny makes me feel so deeply uncomfortable. I don't know if you want to know about how your readers feel, but right now I'm rooting for Hermione to kick Draco's ass and possibly dump him as well. |
TheLastLynx chapter 17 . 5/24/2019 damn. did you already tell us why Draco wants to seduce Ginny? I don't think you did but at the same time I don't want to go back because i want to know what's next! |
TheLastLynx chapter 16 . 5/24/2019 I need to point out how thankful I am for all these warnings. they can be pretty off-putting, but knowing about this stuff beforehand really makes a difference. thank you! |