Reviews for Serpentine
Jessicaanderic12 chapter 40 . 7/30
Is there more?
LOURDESITA100 chapter 40 . 6/1
Please, don't make me wait more for the next chapter! I love this history so much!

Update soon
Sarahostervig1 chapter 40 . 1/10
God i cant wait to read what happens next 3
Silentwings54 chapter 40 . 9/6/2019
I binge read your story! Now I need the next installment, lol!
This has to be one of the best Lumione stories I've read in a while. Keep up the awesome work!
luxsolis chapter 1 . 9/1/2019
Things I like about this fic: Well written, good Grammer, next to no mistakes. I like that Lucius is not to be some miraculously re-formed 'good guy'.

Things that bother me: Obviously the relationship between them is unhealthy. But you are dragging out the drama. they are both incredibly smart people, and have both admitted to certain feelings. Don't keep making them have arguments where they deliberately misunderstand eachother. It feels like you are cheating the characters you have created, and the reader.
Vishbaabii chapter 40 . 8/28/2019
Please, don't make me wait more for the next chapter! I love this history so much! You're amazingg
mintgoflimzy chapter 40 . 8/18/2019
Amazing! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Bunnyboo87 chapter 38 . 8/15/2019
Honestly he deserved what he got - he got told. Lovely fic can’t wait to read more
zeeksmom chapter 40 . 8/14/2019
Great to see an update, but sad it's so short. However, as usual, you've done a great job and left us wanting more. I suspect that shadowy figure is not Lucius, and is not someone who intends good things for Hermione. I love the rocky road you've sent these two down. Thanks!
jbu1810 chapter 40 . 8/12/2019
WAUW can't wait to see what happens next. really love this story and the Lumione pairing, thanks for sharing
Erika Rexen chapter 40 . 8/12/2019
Well, at least she made it somewhere kinda safe-ish. What a horrifying reaction from Lucius about the possible baby... glad Hermione left. Not sure how you'll resolve this, but very grateful for the new chapter. Hope she will stay safe.
Amyeco chapter 40 . 8/12/2019
I'm so glad you updated! i can't wait to see who was lurking in the shadows!
Erika Rexen chapter 39 . 8/12/2019
WooHooo! More chaps! Hope RL settles down for you & that all is well.

As to other fics, have become terrifically fond of the triad thing with Severus, Hermione, & Lucius or once in a while SSHG & Remus Lupin.

Happy writing!
NativeMoon95 chapter 38 . 7/23/2019
That’s it?! Please tell me your still writing? If not, please please come back! This is so good!
Mordelle chapter 38 . 6/10/2019
Ooof! That was rough but good for her! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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