I like this idea!

its good so far please add more

Ok. Soooo...there are a couple mistakes: We stayed for what seemed like a month, not sure but if felt even longer.?
When you said 'not sure' did you mean, 'I'm not sure' ?
Also it should be 'I knew Gabe and I' not 'Gabe and me'
There were also a couple of times were you said, a lowercase I instead of making it capital.
Another thing you could do is add in more descriptions...describe more of his feelings...for example: We stayed for what seemed like an month. I'm not sure, but it could have been longer, time seemed to go as slowly as molasses out of a jar."
That was not the greatest description ever, lol, but if you add more descriptions, not only will the story be longer, but it will flow more.
PM me and I'll be willing to help you. :D

Please update