Reviews for The Black King
Saint Damz chapter 1 . 4/17
Damn...lovely start to the fic. hope this isn't cancelled"highly doubt that". You don't need to change the sword name from midnight,its okay how it is. Besides,it brings originality since its not bleach verse. Now the begging... PLEASE CONTINUE!
808Joker808 chapter 1 . 3/31
Damn this was a really good start and this story has a ton of potential. I liked how you portrayed Ichigo here and I was looking forward to more but considering its been 2 years I won't get my hopes up.
BlueShard20 chapter 1 . 8/23/2019
This first chapter has lot's of potential! Keep it up!
cloud-chan27 chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
This is amazingly well done and I love it and I want more
Lucian Fullbring chapter 1 . 8/28/2018
Good story so far. Happy ichigo isn't super OP right off the bat. You did well to make him seem normal which I have found is uncommon in a lot of crossovers. Also love the non transported to another world thing going on. Can't wait to see if other Bleach elements will be incorporated or if it's just Ichigo a line in RWBY
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2018
I'm actually upset. This is a guys crossover and according to the date it will never be finished. You have made me sad
P-and-P chapter 1 . 2/16/2018
Try mugetsu "moonless sky"
Reikson chapter 1 . 2/14/2018
Ichigo's sword? Try Moonbow.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2018
Pretty cool fic
CoOkIe MoNsT4Z chapter 1 . 10/11/2017
Great start to the story, very original with Ichigo's character which I love seeing. Pairing seems to be Ichigo x Pyrrha that'll be awesome, to strong swordsmen together and you can do a lot with them both being/feeling alone for a lot of their life. it looks like it's been a while since you posted this so not sure if your gonna keep up with it but I really hope you do because it's great so far. Hope to see an update.
The Shadow Monarch chapter 1 . 9/23/2017
Update immediately
Crimson chapter 1 . 8/16/2017
Leaving us in a cliffhanger Fuck man.
AtheismANon-prophetOganization chapter 1 . 8/9/2017
Ah~! You left off with a little cliffy! I absolutely love your story and your descriptions! I'm looking forward to how you'll create Ichigo's background since he's remnant born and how the Emerald Forest test goes. Especially if you're going to place him in a oc team or a pre-existing one. I'm also curious about what Ichigo's semblance is going to be since it looks like he has his quincy powers plus others I'm guessing. But if he has all of his powers then technically he's not remnant born since reiatsu was literally the explanation for everything. I've got a small complaint though. The actual descriptions of his weapons were kind of lacking so getting that image in mind was hard. Would you mind going back and explaining Midnight in more detail as well as Zangetsu's appearance? And I have one question, why is Ichigo's hair long? If you could send a pm explaining your thought process or just saying it'll be explained in a later chapter would be wonderful. I'm not trying to hate on it, I just wanna know why because he never really had his hair stay long enough for a ponytail. Also you have a typo in the very beginning. You typed "with the acceptance of Zangetsu" which isn't correct. It sounds right but isn't. It should be "with the exception of Zangetsu" Thank you for possibly taking the time to read this.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2017
Definitely an interesting start. I don't know whether you have plans for this name, but I'm gonna suggest the obvious name, Zangetsu, for the sword.
Stevenpham379 chapter 1 . 7/20/2017
You could change the name from midnight to Mugetsu(Moonless Sky).
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