| Reviews for The Lawful Gamer |
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   DoomMarine55 chapter 1 . 8/30 Self insert garbage. |
| noddwyd chapter 5 . 7/30 I dont get why I cant get into this story at all. The characters are just totally uninteresting somehow |
| Ragna chapter 2 . 1/5 What the fuck? A sissy? His actions are too forced and dumb that I can't believe someone that acts like him is a trained soldier and is a member of SWAT. Holy hell man get your guy to straighten up and act like a soldier not some pathetic Isekai protag you'd find practically everywhere! I can't believe you made him have a cool background just to burn it in the next chapter! |
| alec-potter chapter 2 . 12/22/2019 Really interesting start but using guns in mideveal setting kind of killed the fun. Isn't that making things too easy. Lot of fun in reading such stories is how will the MC struggle. |
| kanukaianderson123 chapter 2 . 12/1/2019 Fuck |
| kanukaianderson123 chapter 1 . 12/1/2019 "Due to constant fighting the male to female ratio is one to six, which did in-fact encourage for men to have harems, concubines, multiple lovers, etc, something that is commonplace" I know this is hinting at it and I'm probably way to late but pls let there be no harem in the 10 chapters I am about to read. |
| T51b Moridin chapter 1 . 10/31/2019 A neat way to go. Anyone did a full LUCK build amongst these gamers? They would likely be one of the most ancient and powerful ones. |
| H20 Ferrum Dominus chapter 1 . 10/20/2019 Quite an interesting start for a gamer story to say the least. Keep up the good work, and thanks for the chapter! |
| Fauna Hack chapter 1 . 10/18/2019 I read this so far, and read some review to confirm. Your Oc lack Motivation ,Motivation to make stories interesting, For i felt right now is boring, your Oc just yes yes yes. |
| Dragon Lord 97 chapter 11 . 10/12/2019 your mc has access to full archive of Terran federation, why he hasn't sent satellites to orbit? |
| DG2 chapter 3 . 10/7/2019 This feels lackluster. Your whole idea of The Gamer could've been better along with the quick relationship he's building. Should've gotten rid of the Hub, Goddess, GF, other gamers and the current focus of this story. Instead have the 'Lawful' guy fight against his old set of morals as he sees this new world. Not have it following a awkward romance route with in 10K words. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/7/2019 You know I glossed over this but he can speak all languages computer languages binary h human languages Spanish french beast languages kobald gobbledygook magical languages thuum magic chant etc |
| fictionelement777 chapter 11 . 10/6/2019 Yes! Thanks for updating this! |
| PasiveNox chapter 11 . 10/6/2019 nice |
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/6/2019 You’re alive! I can’t wait for the next chapter. |
