It’s a great story!

This is a good story thus far. I hope you'll continue writing it.

I'm liking this story thus far. I hope you write more!

please update!

this story is really good and i hope it continues

I love it so far! When willl Tomo use his Pokedex?

More Please

Delia seems a massive sue

I don't want spoilers.

Hm, Misty learning Aura. I don't know if I like that. It depends on what you are going to do with it, I guess!
It may be that Aura is actually not that rare of a skill, which is interesting in its own right if you properly take advantage.

Beedrill being capable of rational thought. That's a new one on me, especially with their hive mentality. I don't know how much sense that makes. Sure it's logical from a human point of view, but with Beedrill's temperament, that feels really odd.

The idea of a small Meowth dragging two adults away is amusing.

your story was good but the movement ash suggested of leting misty joining them and teach her of aura that movement I stoped reading this and I'm not going to read this fic, what's the point of them having aura and training from young age and still not master of it when they are going to teach others how to use aura and while everyone has aura doesn't means they can learn to use it after all if that's the case then their would be a lot of aura gaurdions running around in cannon as well making it point less if everyone one can use aura then what stoping evil organisations to experiment with it and unleashing all kind of hell wihch will make things even more harder for ash and his siblings

Me: I am very confused by that 'hint'. Anyways I just discovered this little gem of a story.. so, I'll stay and watch. For now.

Great chapter as always, keep up the good work. look forward to seeing what happens next

like XD

great story please keep up the great work

interesting expanded start. I'm curious to see how it continues.