Finally! Alfred got his snap back! I like this chapter. Cannot wait for the next chapter

Oh God, Natalia's a disgusting pig. I don't get how some people can just take advantage of someone while they're unconscious like that. At least Ivan isn't mad at Alfred for this.

eek this is computer code chapter please fix it.

Sorry for the late review.

Your writing improved a lot in this chapter. Good job and keep up the good work!

im sooo happy to see this edited! i love how you managed to make ivan has a dark side while still maintaining his soft side in front of Alfred! and yayy they're gonna have a baby! cant wait to read the next chapter!

I'm interested to see how this story turns out. I like how Alfred doesn't want to act like an omega. I wouldn't want to either.

I understand this is your first A/B/O fic, and that you want us reviewers to go easy on you, but I just wanted to point something out. It has nothing to do with the AU. It's just a small writing tip. You tend to use the phrase 'of course' at the beginning of a lot of your sentences, and it's repetitive. In some sentences, you don't need to use that phrase at all. I would personally cut out most of the uses of 'of course' in this story. If you do this, it will make the sentences flow much smoother, but you don't have to do this if you don't want to. It's just a suggestion.

Ivan is dark and possessive and I LOVE it!

am i bad for saying this is the part ive been waiting for? ahahaa. anw i just looove how gentle and apprehensive is ivan towards alfred here! and Godd I think this is the first time I saw the consummation scene witnessed by other people! poor alfred hha

awww I love how their first meeting came to be! :D

this is going to be awsome! good luck with not getting writers block!

This is pretty interesting!

great job!

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Apart from that, I wish you luck with the story. I'm not really a fan of RusAme, but I am interested.

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