AWW That was so sad! It made me cry! ;(

Especially that part about Eldarion. *sniff sniff*

I cry for them.

But it was AMAZING! I loved it!

You portrayed this daughter beautifully. Your center was the love between Aragron and Arwen, with traces of Eldorian. You did not focus mainly on the daughter, only mentioning her name and nothing more. Tis a welcoming change from the Mary Sew ones I've read.

yu made me cry i've never cried over a fanfiction before til i started reading you stuff :'( you're so intouch with there feeling its so amazing

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That was so sad i cried all the way through omgosh that was so good I loved it.

Oh my God this is the frist story I've actually cryed for! Good job I can't find any other words to say! This is really good!

That was SAD. It's so beautiful, though, and I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes. I'm putting it on my Favourite Stories list because it's so good.

'...touch as you slid you arms around her slim waist?' - You've missed off the 'r' in the 'you' after 'slid' (I hope that makes sense!)

Good lord, I am actually crying here. Not just tears in the eyes kind of a thing, but like, sniffling like an idiot. Brilliantly written. I ache for those the King and Queen left behind, as I ache for them. Sigh. Wow.

really beautiful fic. i always use the flames for toasting marshmallows, but. lol

I already submitted a review, saying that your story had brought me to tears, and that your story was one that i had been searching for for a long time. Unlike some fics, I can actually picture this happening, and relate to what the main character, the princess is feeling. I think that you are an excellent writer.

I have been looking for a fanfic written in the point of view of one of Arwen and Aragorn's daughters, after their deaths. I found it. Your fanfic brought me to tears the whole time i was reading it. That is not easy to do, so take that as a compliment. Good Job!

Again another really beautiful very unusual fic

I loved it! although u did almost make me start blubbing. It was really interesting to see Aragorn and Arwens deaths from a different viewpoint and choosing one of their children was a great choice

looking forward to hopefully many more fics from u

love Kaz

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this is an especially well done story. i was so entranced with the way you wrote that i almost started crying. but then i'm somewhat a crybaby. anyway, keep up the amazing work!

This is SO good! your writing is awsome. Although I think you should put your translations like this, for example: "Cormamin niuve tenna' ta elea lle au" (translation:my heart shall weep until it sees thee again) it's easier. Where do you get this elvish from? it's so awsome! ok.I'll keep reading! UPDATE!

*Namarie!*

That was so sweet and sad! Beautiful!

This is very powerful, it looks at a character we know almost nothing about. It's really quite beautiful.