Cool story so far I hope to see more of it.

Please update!

Keep it up I love this story please.

Please update! Get Master Chief on board as well!

More please :)

Please continue your story, it is very good.

Update?

Oh no! She knows too much! Kill her! (Jk) but I don’t think a teenage girl should be involved with ODST matters. Especially since I really hope that Pete follows UNSC protocol within this situation. Oh, I also wonder if your going to involve the X-men into this. I’m specifically mentioning professor X, since he’s ya know vital to jeans character.

Wait you finally actually updated this story after possibly a fucking, the only way I'm forgiving you is if you finally also update Spider-Man Semper Fi... Please update update that story plz I begz good sir PLZ!.

Give him spider powers

I’m excited for the next chapter you write keep up the good work

Loved the fight! It was amazing and well done. Also does Peter ever gain Spider powers? Will we see villains and other heroes? Does SHIELD find out about him? What ever happened to the original Peter Parker?
Are there any more displays from the new Peter Parker in the future?

This is an awesome story, I'm so glad to see more updates, thank you for keeping it going and I really hope to read more soon, it is awesome and things are getting better, continue soon.

More. more is needed.

Awesome chapter.
Yes, Jean's powers have finally awakened.
Obviously when Peter realizes that somehow Jean is reading minds, he will take her to Mag to check her body. With all the tech the Forerunners have, creating something to help regulate her mental powers seems possible.
Now for Peter telling Jean his real story. Well, that and really hoping for Jean joins Peter's group. An ODST trained Jean with maybe extra Forerunner tech to help her powers is a new meaning to the term powerhouse.

Question, is there a chance that the flaming turkey in Jean knows about the Halo Precursors at least?