| Reviews for When Fate Takes a Turn |
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Guest chapter 4 . 7/3 Update, goddamit! |
Le055Li0n chapter 4 . 3/15 really pumped for the next chapter |
rswknight chapter 4 . 3/9 Great job. Glad I found this story. Looking forward to more |
qqn chapter 4 . 2/16 S'il te plait, la suite? J'aime vraiment ton histoire |
kaisoolove chapter 4 . 12/5/2019 really love it... totally caught my eyes to read it... hope you update more soon... |
Natsuyuuki chapter 4 . 11/12/2019 Interesting. |
EMReader81 chapter 4 . 11/10/2019 Definitely enjoyed you showing how all three kids are evolving as people as their shifts in perceiving the world and people around them happens. |
Zabzab chapter 4 . 10/17/2019 This story is full of promises and I like it a lot. Solid foundations to build upon, already great character exploration (if not development since it is the beginnning), a few changes here and there to deviate from Canon in order to keep things interesting. Everything is wrapped in perfect English (or pretty damn close to perfect) so what is there to ask for? Well the next chapter, obviously ! I've read your author profile in hope of finding more goodness and have read your health problems. I wish you well. If you ever come back to this, I'd gladly betaread for you. Bedt writing to you, |
Newest Reader chapter 4 . 9/17/2019 Very emotional and I love it, can't wait for more. Please update soon. |
qqn chapter 4 . 9/8/2019 La suite stp! |
qqn chapter 4 . 8/31/2019 Pitié la suite! |
Kawisdom chapter 4 . 8/28/2019 Rereading this reminded me how fascinating it is. Naruto and his team are changing their opinions and goals and it's not a painless process for any of them. Sasuke especially would have to change right down to the core of himself, where he places the label "avenger". Your fight scene worked, with Sasuke going all out because he always imagines he'll be fighting alone. That's how I see him, anyway. Naturally a trickster like Naruto turned the fight around with clever improvisation. He's got a talent for thinking on his feet. I hope to see this team take shape now that the others are finally seeing that struggling alone isn't working. Now they just need a real sensei. This idiot they've got just wants to brag that he taught the Uchiha prodigy. |
Sky318 chapter 4 . 7/7/2019 I love it but I'm not sure about Naruto/Marín because I feel that there are family. I think that isn't necessary romance |
Phoenixx Rising chapter 4 . 7/3/2019 I like this chapter. I like that Naruto and Sakura have a little budding friendship. Here’s hoping they can get Sasuke on board. |
Blitza chapter 4 . 6/30/2019 Nice! Very exciting! |