| Reviews for Red Earth & Pouring Rain |
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sailorlyoko4life chapter 6 . 6/10/2019 Wow. That's one heck of a scary ride for both of them. This was fleshed out incredibly well. I liked how you focused more on the emotional aspect then the physical. Alot of people get so caught up in the sex that they don't explore the emotional havoc it can cause afterwards, especially with abusive/addictive relationships. I love how you used Mon-el as a reasoning for the constant exposure resource. I also liked how Alex and Lena got to come to an understanding with each other emotionally too. Keep up the good work with your writing! |
Rufy SaeYuki chapter 6 . 4/18/2019 nice but sad. Red-K Kara just to get Lena. I'm curious if they're talk to eachother n not in oneside story chap. how Kara upset with Alex about Lena n how Lena days with Kara before n after Red-K. thank you for making this GBU. |
tmarie9 chapter 6 . 2/16/2018 So many feels oh my gosh. Good feels, but my goodness. Beautifully bittersweet story! ] |
lemon-rind chapter 6 . 2/8/2018 Well, I was not expecting this. I've been here. I've been on both sides. It didn't take weeks. It's already taken months, and it's going to take years. There's something truly beautiful about this piece. I think this is the type of story I relate to the most. There's so much yearning, both from Lena and Kara. All they wish for is to love and be loved, and their desires spur toxic choices. Okay, sorry. Now I'm projecting and getting lost in my own head. This is a story I want to favourite a hundred times. It's the type of story that makes me want to start a publishing company so that I could offer you a deal. It's the type of story that makes me want to be a better reviewer, because I know that every writer has questions they wish they could ask their readers and I just... don't feel I can express myself well enough. If I didn't already feel like you were a good writer before, this just cemented it. IDK WHY your stories aren't front and centre of the pack. There are definitely stories with more favourites which couldn't hope to capture my attention the way this did. I really hope I get to see more from you, where ever and who ever you are. |
Tear of Light chapter 6 . 1/15/2018 Very late, but a wonderful way to end this story. Great job on this piece. :) |
XxGoddessItzelXx chapter 6 . 1/10/2018 Amazing Chapter, great story honestly. Update soon. |
Guest chapter 6 . 12/31/2017 Beautifully crafted. |
FFChik chapter 6 . 1/1/2018 Amazing |
LOCISVU chapter 6 . 12/31/2017 BEAUTIFUL! |
dnmann chapter 6 . 12/31/2017 Good chapter. |
superlee chapter 5 . 12/16/2017 You can’t be done with this?! I need an actual ending. Please? |
BlackVelvet89 chapter 5 . 10/13/2017 One of my fav supercorp fiction. Will you ever continue this one?! |
doctorgayass chapter 1 . 8/30/2017 the way you write your stories are amazing. they are always so creative and beautiful. |
Vehemence96 chapter 1 . 8/3/2017 You write with such grace and imagery it's absolutely amazing to read. I do hope you continue. i'm excited for Kara and Lena'a reunion. |
LOCISVU chapter 5 . 6/22/2017 Alex can't keep Lena away from Kara forever. |