I didn't really get it but I love your coherent writing and how it just makes you feel like you're reading something real- I can't put it into words but you have a lot of talent.

This is starting to get good, still thinking it's Nate, but waiting for more clues! I can't wait till the next update to find out more.

Again I say...what?

Let's start with stupid, then go on to utterly pointless, and finish up with total waste of time. I don't know what you thought you were writing, but it wasn't Leverage, and really isn't much of anything come to it.

Please find a new hobby since writing ISN'T your forté.

This is good but I'm still confused. Aliens? Color? Change of pov? I have no basis to work with except the characters. Is this world building? Or will these things be explained?
Ps: besides being confused I really like your writing.

Ahhhh! Whoah, I'm intrigued! Can't wait for the next update! :DDDD

Like this beginning. I am intrigued to find out what happens next. It would be cool if this some how ended up being tied into Person of Interest.

Confused but intrigued.

? Ok you have my attention. I think something to do with The Librarians because of the way the letters just keep showing up or maybe Nate testing them. It did say he couldn't baby them all the time. This sounds interesting so how about another chapter pretty soon. Say in about 30 mintues?

what ?