Reviews for Mending the Heart of a Broken Child
angel knight 1642 chapter 2 . 5/15
i love how the story is going i hope you continue this
Amethyst2002 chapter 2 . 4/16
When's the next chapter? I can't wait, I love this story.
Stellaris chapter 2 . 7/5/2019
Is this story dead? If it is, that's a real shame- I quite liked it, and was interested to see where it was going.
Lanny-Sama chapter 2 . 5/15/2018
OH NO DARK KIRBY IS GOING TO FREAK OUT WHEN HE WAKES UP!

I really enjoyed this !
Chlstarr chapter 2 . 5/12/2018
This story is SO GOOD! I can't wait to see what else you ave in store!.
Jet Engine chapter 2 . 4/18/2018
This is good. This is very good. We need more fics that address Shadow Kirby and Dark Meta Knight. I'm eager to see what happens when Shadow wakes up. My guess: He'll take one look at Meta Knight and freak out on the spot. Poor little guy.
FanficLovingPerson chapter 1 . 4/12/2018
So this isn't based off the games...? Instead the poor anime...? Well that's a shame.
FanficLovingPerson chapter 2 . 4/12/2018
PLEASE MAKE MORE
Chenamon chapter 2 . 4/3/2018
This was such a good chapter. I can't wait to see more of it.
1Thunderfire chapter 2 . 10/17/2017
Huzzah, another chapter and I've got some unexpected free time at work to read it too.

Great stuff; I love Meta Knight and Kirby's warm relationship but I wonder how they'll act when Shadow Kirby wakes up and sees Meta Knight? I really, really just want to hug him now... :(
Sei Bellissima chapter 2 . 10/16/2017
Argh, the suspense!

Is Shadow okay? Will he like Kirby? How will he react to Meta Knight?! The suspense is just eating me alive!

Me being weird aside, this was another wonderful chapter, it really was. I wish I could say more than that, but I've never really been a good reviewer.

Anyway, ignore me flipping out and take all the time you need to- among writing my own fanfiction, the eventual releases of a few video games I've been awaiting and Disney's new movie Coco, and life itself, I'll have plenty of things to keep me occupied until then. Just make sure you have fun writing! :D
Pure knight chapter 2 . 10/16/2017
this story is so cool!
*Knowing the author will try to work on the story as often as they can fills you with PATIENCE*
EveningEmerald chapter 2 . 10/16/2017
Wow, this is... AMAZING! Y'know, like the Amazing Mirror? Heh.. (Sorry for bad pun lol) Can't wait to see what happens next

I have a feeling that Shadow is going to think Meta Knight is Dark MK at first and freak out XD poor kid
Jewelsio chapter 2 . 10/15/2017
AAAA oh my gosh, I loved this! Poor Kirby, getting scared of Shadow's conditon, but at least he found him! Meta's such a good dad, I swear...(I know it's mostly from GSA training, but still, you can tell he genuinely cares)

I can't wait for chapter 3- take as much time as you need with it!
CosmicVT chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
OH MY GOSH YOU WROTE A FIC ABOUT SHADOW KIRBY
...I'M NOT ALONE! Someone else wrote a fic with Shadow Kirby in it; I may just melt...Amazing Mirror was my first game, and I pretty much had all the Shadow Kirby moments memorized since I always felt there was something more going on with him...that we never got explained, but oh well. (seriously though, why is he the only non-evil Mirror copy? He can even wield the real Galaxia in the final battle, and everyone ignores the little guy when there's so much to him!)

Anyway, I'm curious to see how Shadow reacts to the real world now that he's out of his realm. (hahaha...no that wasn't a good pun) I also can't wait to his relationship to regular-world Kirby, as well, since I don't think I've ever seen a story touch on that before...(Well, I don't think I've seen any fic touch on Shadow Kirby, so that's a given. :p)

Really good so far! Not sure if you could tell, but I'm really excited you're writing about Shadow Kirby. :D
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