Reviews for I Will Be With You For Evermore
stxrmiiskies chapter 19 . 3/8
I love this! I'm not sure if your continuing this story but please do, it was wondeful!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/31/2017
I love how they forgot about Phillepe and he ended up relieving himself in the library. I was dying.
eternallyenchanted7 chapter 9 . 7/22/2017
I know...beating a somewhat dead horse here but LEFOU can use his love to break Gaston's spell.I can't think of anyone else that tell me that Lefou (Gaston's true love) was spared the curse so he can save Gaston.

Shipping Gaston & Lefou forever!Oh I'm the one who wrote Guest reviews mentioning Belle seeming weaker/dependent on my WiFi messes up the 't know why but glad you could you don't object to gay lovers then Lefou should be the one to save Gaston from the curse.

:D
eternallyenchanted7 chapter 7 . 7/22/2017
I hope that this story will be have been spoiled rotten by your timely your other stories.A Terrifying Turn of Events 2ND draft should be posted & the first rewrite was just what the doctor stories give us what the film could writing forever.
christianqueenofegypt chapter 19 . 6/17/2017
I just finished this last chapter and am left longing to read the next one! This story is beautiful and unique. Though I hate the thought of what was done to Belle, I was inspored to read her strength through tragedy, and having courage to share her story with Beast.

About the curse, which I know changes matters, especially considering Gaston. I understand the logistics, but sending Belle away seems beyond harsh. Considering what Gaston did to Belle and Beast's impending response, considering his decision, could the council take Gaston into judgement should he fail, and take a second look at Beast's further growth of character?
Surely the council is watching and waiting to see what Beast will do? The old Beast may or may not have ripped him to ribbons, but since he's learned to let go, should his further grace toward Gaston count for something? (I love Beast/Belle, but at some point I do hope Adam can return ;) )

Anyway, whatever you decide to do, I look forward to reading the next chapter!
eternallyenchanted7 chapter 13 . 6/14/2017
We need more Belle/Beast romance plus a couple chapters spanning 1-2 yes of Belle's should solve your trouble with how she should can condense 1-2 yrs in 2-3 Beast doesn't break his curse since I know thats not your fav plot then please consider Belle/Beast having a physical have to be the full act but they could be a real couple that kisses,hugs,sleeps in same bed they cannot leave the castle it seems impractical to ignore the I know you want to respect/not cross the beastiality hate seeing love I've kept this fanfic flowing.
eternallyenchanted7 chapter 19 . 6/14/2017
I do hope that we can get some PG-13 Belle/Beast rating wouldn't violate the beastiality line since people taking care of animals see them as is really a man inside so kisses are OK just not making love.I think that they are close enough that the romance wouldn't hinder her could always just make a chapter or two that spans several months of her after that...I know I'm beating a dead horse plot here...but breaking the curse would be if the curse is not broken I see no reason for Belle/Beast to live without physical 't seem practical since after a while it's either be happy or no,I'm not someone dying to see beauties mating with saying if the curse isn't broken then it will be long lonely nights (play on words of your other titled fix 12 years).Hoping I've inspired you & don't mind an honorable I were better with my verbal my text is jumbled its because my web signal is bad.

Keep writing.
eternallyenchanted7 chapter 8 . 5/23/2017
Willing to adopt any story that you cannot only after you feel you just can' then,my part would only start after yours.I hate to see stories shelved for years.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/20/2017
Please do not let this fanfic that its on hold but hoping for the this point the story is long enough that 1-3 chapters should be enough for Belle to don't have to specify a timeframe,just say all of spring As for After 12 years...I think it's a mistake for Belle to die without the very least allow Agathe to bring Belle to the castle with a potion to heal her.I just can't accept that but it's your story so I can respect that.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2017
Please don't let this fanfic die.
Guest chapter 19 . 5/9/2017
Okay, so I'm just going to give a rough sum-up of how I've felt about your story, mostly because I have strong yet mixed feelings about it and also because I read "A Belated Confession", so I can sort of compare the two.

I enjoy the idea of this at the very least; I'm a big fan of any story where the Beast doesn't change back (whether the servants still do or not is irrelevant to me), so of course this captured my interest when I saw it.

The beginning is really solid, though I'm conflicted at the same time. On one end, I like the idea that, if this epic climax hadn't happened, Belle wouldn't have had the incentive to confess in time, but on the other, it looks... a little bit bad that the sweeter option for Belle to take (asking if she can stay) ended up giving her the "bad" ending. This is technically more at fault with the 2017 movie, because Beast sending Belle away looks a lot more selfish when the objects will become inanimate if he does nothing, but yeah.

I also like the idea of them trying to find a loophole for the sake of getting the objects back to normal. I like Agatha coming by, and while I don't like the whole thing about a council and rules and regulations and the like (mostly because I see it as "adding too much" and making things a bit complicated, but I'm sure it's there so Agatha can't just break the spell on Beast, which is fine), the interactions are generally fun.

So, up until then, the story is generally enjoyable with maybe a bit too much exposition but nothing else really wrong; I actively followed it until then.

It's unfortunately where Gaston has his way with Belle where the story starts losing me, and it has nothing to do with the subject matter, because you did something similar in A Belated Confession and I actually really like that story!

I think what it comes down to is the amount of angst from then to now. In A Belated Confession, yeah, it was a real downer and Belle was distraught with it, but then they sort of moved on to the next thing. The key points of sadness in that one were Belle feeling guilty for not being fast enough to break the curse, Maurice and the issues that came with that, and Belle having Gustav's baby. Most of these are resolved in one or two chapters or just come up occasionally.

My problem here is that I feel that the sadness drags on too long for me to stay invested. I do think it's just a personal thing, as most people seemed to enjoy it, and I understand that everything is going wrong, but Belle having PTSD and struggling - which I'm sure is interesting to others - just doesn't roll with me as easily because everyone's already been depressed and there's very little to contrast that. Yes, they all try to comfort each other, but in the end, it hasn't fully worked so I'm just left with a sort of empty feeling. I'm not saying Gaston wouldn't try to have his way with Belle or that she wouldn't get PTSD, because honestly I don't know, but when there's already this sadness from the enchanted objects being inanimate, these extra things coming to bring the story down further just feels unnecessary.

A Belated Confession kept up the contrast. Whenever characters were sad, it either didn't last TOO long or there was other stuff going on that kept me interested, and Belle not having PTSD let her be upset, but not to the point where it became too depressing. When I first heard that Belle was going through PTSD, I was a little wary, but I kept reading for a few chapters just to see where it would go.

And... yeah, I just don't think the story was for me anymore. I like the premise, and most of the first eight chapters were really solid, but after that, I'm really sorry to say that it just gets too depressing for me to keep reading.

I hope I don't sound rude; I just was kind of thinking this to myself and had to explain my point. I like your style of writing and you do soft-spoken smart Beast really well, but I just can't get into this.
bananafox chapter 3 . 4/30/2017
this is a really good story but you need to rethink the language you are using. butt, jive and okay are not words that would have been used. it's a little distracting to read them.
ou49839u3jti4jto chapter 19 . 4/26/2017
sorry for asking for or rather, i want to suggest if we can have some romantic moments between Belle and the Beast
eternallyenchanted7 chapter 1 . 4/25/2017
Hi!I've written here as a Guest heart is still tied to both curses being Gaston's curse since Pere Robert is truly an need some romance in this story between Belle/Adam.I know you want to devote some healing time to Belle but Belle/Beast do have a relationship now.I think that they should explore their newfound dont want this fanfic to become stale.I dont think its fair to break Gaston's curse but not Adam' I also realize that life is not for being a stickler for canon but curses shouldnt be are meant to teach a lesson & very rarely is someone cursed is your story so I respect a great story & I hope you continue it.I type on my phone so sometimes because of wifi the text is writing forevermore.
ladivina chapter 19 . 4/23/2017
I love this story so far. Personally I don't care if the curse gets lifted or not. Also keep going as you are because I can see a lot of ways this story can go without it going flat. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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