This is ridiculous. Alduin new t able to destroy a phylactry? Utterly ridiculous.

And if Lily is a dragon, then she can’t be truly dead as there was no Dragonborn to absorb her soul.

Plotholes? What Potholes?

Otherwise it’s an interesting concept

Seriously by his name's indication he doesn't have a problem

Hermione is being a bitch and a shitty friend. Not something I think her personality would normally do. The Dragonborn part? Shrug. Either way the joke is old and getting more than annoying. It’s not funny anymore and I’m just starting to dislike the story because you can’t let a stupid joke go.

Option 1-C.

Boethiah would turn on him in an instant.

Ok, crying VERY not Alduin-like, hell it's not even dragon-like (in the context of Skyrim lore), and the constant shifts in the point of view every few paragraphs is a bit jarring, but I will push though and see what happens

Before I start reading I want to guess which house Harry will be in, and it's either going to be the tried-and-true Gryffindor, or the cunning House of Slytherin

If this story was written in 3rd person point of view, it would have flowed a lot better. Instead it jumped from person to person to complete a scene.

Oh look, rapey guys. Red flag for shitty story.

Why would you name Lily Potter “Yol Wuld Ro”.
It means Fire (Yol) Whirlwind (Wuld) Balance (Ro).
That doesn't even make sense. Fire and Whirlwind are both beginnings to different shouts, and Balance is the middle of Fus Ro Dah (Force Balance Push). Get you shouts right, bud. At least try to come up with something instead of mashing together a couple random shouts that you think might sound cool together.

Option 4 and option D: sheogorath
Voldemort (moldy shorts) is an idiot who might think that because sheogorath is the most powerful that he would be the best choice and before you say that sheo isn’t the most powerful remember that he used to be jyggalag at one point who was cursed by the other 15 princes for fear of his power

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yeah.. I'm already disappointed when I see POV change.. let me tell you, POV change and first person perpective don't mix, makes the story look silly.. want to have freedom to change POV? write it in third person, and use page break for the POV change..

Authors who writing bashing of other characters are nothing more than insecure fools.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.